i haven't given this the proper read it deserves, but this was pretty fucking amazing. it plays out like a movie, i'm thinking of "minority report" among others. you are clearly a writer who has been writing for a while and has a firm handle on her (his?) art, and to be honest i am more than a little jealous! you've described convincingly this insulated universe, with just the right amount of detail. while i usually have the bad habit of scanning over dense paragraphs, yours drew me in because of how easily they flowed and how natural everything seemed, even though objectively it's all very strange and new. i'm rambling now, without having even read this through carefully, so i'll come back later this week and maybe leave a more coherent comment.
this was genius. i finished reading it yesterday, but it's been on my mind since then --- and although i generally don't do this, i actually printed out this fic to read (and re-read!). the idea is incredibly original, and the execution is brilliant
...and this comment basically does no justice to the amazing quality of this story, but i just want you to know that i haven't liked a fanfic to this extent since...forever. i hope you write more such stuff.
i'm a huge fan of writing that makes you think - and this fic did just that. during the introduction and several other sections, i had to reread it to make sure i understood everything, but this was really well executed. o__o
i also loved that you used sungmin as the protagonist, since he's usually not in this sort of role. :3 lovely characterisation of him and just, wow. this idea is sort of amazing, and i really liked it. :)
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this was genius. i finished reading it yesterday, but it's been on my mind since then --- and although i generally don't do this, i actually printed out this fic to read (and re-read!). the idea is incredibly original, and the execution is brilliant
...and this comment basically does no justice to the amazing quality of this story, but i just want you to know that i haven't liked a fanfic to this extent since...forever. i hope you write more such stuff.
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i also loved that you used sungmin as the protagonist, since he's usually not in this sort of role. :3 lovely characterisation of him and just, wow. this idea is sort of amazing, and i really liked it. :)
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