Dare You to Move: PG-13, Romance

[windswept_fic]

          If I were to take a chronological look back on my life according to love, certain people would stand out. There was Alex, the sweetest man I’d ever known. And there was Anna, the naïve young diva who I felt I had failed; and now, there is Nikolai. The amazing man almost the same age as my younger brother, and for whom I would give my life

Comments

[pas_un_elephant]

Poor Sergei and Nikolai! It's going to work out, right? :P
Hadn't read the original, but now that I have, really liked both.

[holdeverysong]

This is positively lovely. I've always admired writers who have the ability to get inside their muses' heads, and you never disappoint. :)

[isachi]

Since I'm now your giggling, screaming fangirl I feel compelled to say this story == <3

I like the image of Sergei wanting to be protector and guide and Nik basically going "eh ... fuck that!" The "tornado" bit is especially apt I think :)

[bkm5191]

I forgot how much I liked close first person. I love reading 'I' in fic.