Giggles in the Dark: PWP, NC-17

[windswept_fic]

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We didn't even make it past the door.

I mean, we tried, we really did. Kept our hands off each other during the ride to Gilbert's apartment, didn't touch when we went through the downstairs foyer or up the elevator or down the hall. But then I had to wait and watch as Gil fumbled with his keys, that intense gaze of his narrowing in a

Comments

[_goldenroad_]

So how hot was this? There are no words.

You made my day! It was going so terribly, and this made me smile and, um, be really happy. So thank you :)

[cradle_song]

Yay, I'm glad it brightened your day! ^_^ I always like hearing about that sort of thing. :D (not you having a bad day, but me helping make it a bit better, of course)

[thought_ribbons]

OH MAN! here i was worried this was going to be some horrible puck-bunny thing

BUT ZOMGGGGG SO HAWT

Did I mention the drunk?

Maybe we were more than a little drunk.

lol that sounds so familar..

[cradle_song]

*pulls offended face*
Would I give you puck-bunny-ness??

*G* But hehe, glad you liked it. And yeah, hockey boys and drinking, clearly they go together.
*eyes certain brothers, snickers*

[thought_ribbons]

I was praying you wouldn't but I wad afraid that you'd go over to the dark side!!!!!!!!!!!

[x_jordanmc_x]

hehe I had to reply to this one at the mention of certain brothers:P So funny. Hockey players and drinking so does go together, although underaged is bad :P hehe. Anyways, this was amazingly hot, so great job, I like your stories :) <33

[neo_queen157]

i haven't actually read this yet. but derick is so freaking hot.

actual review to follow

[cradle_song]

He IS! In his draft he was like 'awwwww how cute and fluffy and cuddly' and now he's like 'drips sex while walking'. x.X

[ovielove]

Mmm...yummy! I loved this - very well-written and omg hot and lovely.

And oh, looky there, now I was on top.
Straddling those pale hips, my hands pressed against that firm chest, Gil with his lips wet and bruised, disheveled beneath me...
Bed?
Beds were overrated, anyway.

*snickers* I loved that whole part - actually the whole story made me laugh. Nice job!

[cradle_song]

Aw, I'm glad! I was aiming for just a little bit of fun, humorous smut, nothing too serious or deep. *G*

[honeybee718]

Hot's an understatement really. That was delicious.

I loved his broken thought process. Cause when you're drunk...really you can't hold a thought for too long before being distracted by something else, but Gilbert Burle's an awfully nice distraction.

In conclusion, you're awesome.

[cradle_song]

...hell yes Gilbert's a nice distraction. I wanna be distracted by him...

And, awww, I'm blitzed you think so! ^-^