Tumbling Down: Romance/Angst, PG; Part 18

[windswept_fic]

Part Eighteen

I clicked off the light as I left the bathroom, a towel wrapped around my waist, using a smaller one to slowly towel my hair dry. My whole body felt heavy with the weight of emotions and uncertainties that I piled atop myself, and putting on clothes seemed like an effort far beyond my grasp; instead I leaned tiredly

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[terredancer]

Oh, oh, oh...

Oh, Sergei...

Wasn't keeping things from Nikky what got him into trouble earlier in the story? And God, something like this...

Although, I think Igor's right about him.

*sighs* I love this story.

[cradle_song]

Wasn't keeping things from Nikky what got him into trouble earlier in the story?

Yes.

Although, I think Igor's right about him.

And...yes. *g*

Well, it's not as if anyone's ever accused the boy of being bright...

[caitlin]

Sweet and everything, but...

You're still MEAN to Sergei! (And Nikky too...)

God, they really need to TALK about things...

And maybe you need to write an NC-17 part!

Please?

(note: I do not have a Federov/Zherdev icon yet, so I used my favourite smiley icon...)

C.

[cradle_song]

Who ever said anything about being nice?!

And maybe you need to write an NC-17 part!

That was 17. >.> And if I had put in the sex scene for this part it would have taken another month..

[_goldenroad_]

This is beautiful and my favorite series ever. Poor, poor Sergei. It's so sad. And Nikky is unbelievably hot, the way you write him. (And in real life, too lol.) Please write more soon!

[cradle_song]

Aw, thank you. ^-^

Sergei's totally getting what's coming to him. He's just so beat-up-able.

[minibennie]

This is such a wonderful story. The emotion you express in your writing brings a tear to my eye. This is so bittersweet. I love it!

[cradle_song]

I'm happy to hear that! *g* (though okay, maybe not the tearing up)

....*stares at your icon*

[thought_ribbons]

ghruehieahguiwhgi

Talk about killing me much! you NEED!! to write more of this becuase it's def. amazing!!

i LOVE IT!!!!!!!

It's so.. Melchonley and bitter sweet and *sighs* just what I needed to read today thank you!

[cradle_song]

You wanted to read something melancholy? *g* Usually I get that for the fluffiness I write.

But I'm glad you're still liking it. :)