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[fic] Kiss Me Hello

Oct 12, 2008 16:49

Title: Kiss Me Hello
Author: windy (win03die )
Genre: Angsty, Friendship
Rating: PG-13 for.. language
Pairing: none really
Characters: Subaru, Tegoshi, mentions of K8
Length: Oneshot, 1800+ words
Summary: When the gossip papers hit the stands and he gets isolated by the management, Subaru is devastated because for the first time in years he feels truly alone ( Read more... )

fic, tego, k8

Comments 4

mujun October 12 2008, 21:43:38 UTC

Wow, Windy! Such an interesting plot! I really like Subaru's frustrations with himself and Tegoshi's knowledge of when to finally intervene and Ryo's way of taking care of him. So sweet and yet dark and mysterious. Tegoshi shaving Subaru about broke my heart. Strawberry soap! I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you!

win03die October 13 2008, 08:14:06 UTC

I am THIS happy you don't hate it to death. I was so damned insecure about publishing this in the first place.

Subaru is a totally new one for me, and I rewrote this like crazy because I'm a scaredycat and like to stick to familiar characters like that.
Also, this song is awesome. Got to be one of my favourites ever, the lyrics just.. get me, and they fit this situation too.

If I had to pick a scene I'm happy with, it'd be the shaving part actually. Shaving someone else is.. such an intimate thing.

♥

minami_yu October 13 2008, 00:45:13 UTC

You do subassan greatly.
His depresion.
His sadness.
His guilt.
His not evil,his just lost,thats all,a lost soul that needed a wiser one to straighten him.
And thats the part tegonyan could fill.I didnt know he could be that wise tough ;b
thanks for sharing.

win03die October 13 2008, 08:11:43 UTC

Thank you. This was hard to write not only becaue of the new character but also because of how to deal with the guilt without letting it dwell on and on, because that gets very frustrating to read (oh, do I know~~).

Sometimes it takes an outsider to sort things out, but you feel safer if the outsider is someone who someone you love knows.

Tegoshi has his image. And it comes on so strong in front of the camera that it doesn't often allow people peek at how he cares for the ones that are close to him.
His act is 95% a ploy, and it's a well done one. But he is a darling :)