The Pit of Black Hearts Part 4 of 7 (Paper Entry){Read Only, OOC Comments and Questions are Welcome}

[wily_willywonka]

Comments

[nyami_rose1]

I don't know if it was intentional or not, but your paragraphs died.

(Translate to: Lack of proper seperation... slowly... killing me... Oh, God, MY EYES...! THEY BURN!!!)

XD

[notverydevilish]

Aw, be nice, Nyan. You should have seen my old stuff. RTF format's been kind of screwy on here lately, anyway. ^^

I can read it just fine. ♥

[purpion]

ACK!! I'll have to fix that. I was using RTF and, ugh, this is terrible!!

[notverydevilish]

Somehow the image of sexy!Wonka is pretty thoroughly breaking my brain--well done, Purple-kun. (And welcome back! ^^) I think I have roughly the same reaction Wonka does to it, except I'm ridiculously amused at the same time.

Every Yu-Gi-Oh fan in the place is probably giggling and screaming in their head "IT'S YAMI WONKA! HEAD FOR THE HILLS!" XD

I think you're going to have to hand-HTML the stuff you put up after this. Looks like LJ's killing the RTF again. (If I knew I'd be on this christmas, I'd offer to do it for you to save time, but chances are I won't be, since I'm travelling. *sigh*)

[purpion]

Ye~ah. Uh, which is why I don't like this one. The uber pimp Wonka is pretty....icky. It's so opposite to him and this is one of the biggest reasons why he was able to defeat it so quickly.

Thanks for the welcome!! I'm in process now of editing this mess of a blowup so it'll be much easier to read. Gosh, sorry about the wall of text.

I hope you have a safe trip and I'll see you when you have the chance to get online.

[obseletevulture]

I was thinking less "uber pimp" and more, "incubus high on red-hots" (you've always got ot leave a candy reference in your inner demons, of course...*has an evil literary mind that's too easily amused by bad puns*)

Again, the wall of text didn't bother me in the slightest. I had a hard time realizing it bothered other people at all, to be honest. ^^

And sure thing! You have a good break, and take good care of my little babies, here... (Nyan at least will rail magnificently at becoming inadvertant family for me to give away to strangers in top-hats. And MOG will rail about my lack of literary child support or something... Frodo-kun's probably the msot stable of them all, come to think on. XDDD What GOOD CHILDREN~♥)

*is already going nuts at the thought o being on break* Urghhhhh~

[nyami_rose1]

Is it wrong that I thought Soul Fragment!Wonka rather than Yami!Wonka?

[purpion]

YamiWonka!! Yeah, he's a real prize and extremely sadistic at the same time. XD I don't think we'll see that part of him emerge, thank goodness. That would be too much.

Thanks for the welcome! I'm just glad that I'm feeling better. Nasty bronchial pneumonia is nothing to sneeze at.

[purpion]

Don't get what I had. Nasty stuff and it was a hard recovery. I'm just glad it's over.

[smithsassistant]

Wow. Nice entry. Yea I had to admit that the YamiWonka fits here. You pulled it off nicely and I never thought of a lustful Wonka. I am glad to hear that you are better. I was worried about you being sick.

[purpion]

Yeah, he's pretty icky here. XD

[smithsassistant]

Yea that is true though it is interesting to see him in that light.

[purpion]

Eh, I would call it light, but sure. It is interesting to see how the sins try to personify him which is fail on the demon's part.