Untitled

Nov 10, 2006 23:37

Title: Untitled
Word Count: 602
Spoilers: Vague spoilers, I guess, but not really--you're in no danger.
Characters/Pairings: You figure it out. (No pairing intended, though.)
Warnings: Character suicide. This is a really crazy fic; I was slightly insane when I wrote it. Sorry. It's not good. In fact, it stinks.
It was Sunday and he was alone.
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0dreamer0 November 11 2006, 07:15:13 UTC
oh, oh! what did the note say, what in the world? you have to tell us, this is no fair. )=

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willywonka3435 November 11 2006, 19:17:48 UTC
xD Thanks for reading. Er--what do /you/ think it said?

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hry2007 November 11 2006, 07:25:51 UTC
This is a good read, but could you perhaps put a warning about talk of suicide?

I guess it's a tossup between spoiling the end and forewarning, but losing a friend to suicide, it's not something to read about before bed.

I like the centered-style you used.

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willywonka3435 November 11 2006, 19:18:57 UTC
Warning now added. :) Thanks for reading!

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awwsugah November 11 2006, 07:58:05 UTC
ACK. Brilliant. Smashing. And, as 0dreamer0 mentioned, WHAT DID THE BLOODY NOTE SAY?! I must know!!!

Very provoking. The details were haunting, as if predicating a fate that was already inescapable. Blah. I am floored.

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willywonka3435 November 11 2006, 19:21:58 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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ukrazy November 11 2006, 14:52:54 UTC
Well, that last line right about killed me. Beautifully written, but a small warning would be nice.

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willywonka3435 November 11 2006, 19:22:53 UTC
Warning added. :) Thanks very much for reading.

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panda_chibi November 12 2006, 01:03:12 UTC
Very, very good.

You know, if I were to vote for the character I think most likely to attempt suicide, or think about it, it would be Wilson... Is it the same with you, or did the story just come to you?

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panda_chibi November 12 2006, 04:18:03 UTC
I agree, actually--hence the idea. xD Glad you liked it.

Love your icon, by the way.

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willywonka3435 November 12 2006, 04:18:37 UTC
Er--that was me, sorry. Just forgot to log in.

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panda_chibi November 12 2006, 04:25:54 UTC
Thanks. Too bad its not mine. cirrocumulus made it. It still makes me laugh (because, sometimes, I just can't help having the mind of a 13 year old boy when it ocmes to sex jokes)

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