BRAND NEW! "Hazard Pay - Chapter 27"

Jul 24, 2013 14:28

Title: Hazard Pay - Chapter Twenty-Seven

Pairing: Noah/OMC

Rating: M

Prompt: Action!Noah in action ripped from the headlines!

Disclaimer: Don’t own ‘em. Don’t make no money.

Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 18

myalterego1 July 24 2013, 20:16:35 UTC
There are no words to describe how much I love this story. I was such a Luke and Noah girl - but I so love Noah and Jeff together. This was such a good chapter.

Have a great trip!

Reply

willwork4dean July 25 2013, 02:50:51 UTC
Honestly, when I started the story, my plan was to send Noah on a little adventure and then reunite him with Luke. I still don't know how it happened, but I fell in love with Jeff and Noah. I'm just thankful that so many readers were willing to go along for the ride!

Reply


seajellybaby July 24 2013, 22:24:08 UTC
Thinking that's Casey who just walked ;-)

Sweet, sexy chapter! They are just beautiful together and facing the world down without much worry because they both realise they aren't alone in it!

Great! Great!

Still feel sorry for poor Luke though :-( This is gonna hurt!

Can't wait for more!

Reply

willwork4dean July 24 2013, 22:28:33 UTC
LOL! I'll tell you a secret. It was supposed to be Luke who walked in. But it turned out to be Casey instead! Good call on your part!

Reply

willwork4dean August 6 2013, 01:18:15 UTC
New chapter up now!

Reply


pirl July 25 2013, 01:48:26 UTC
Aaaaaahhh, this chapter makes me want to go back and re-read the whole story from the beginning!! Jeebus, I love them so damn much. So happy that they're both taking the 'outing' in such a reasonable and mature way. And dumb-dumb, jealous Luke leaking photos? You douche! Get over it Snyder, you lost him for good.

And haha! I suspected it was Casey walking in on them. HEE!! Poor boy, gonna have to scrub those eyes. :P Tho, I'm a bit peeved he interrupting their "sweet loving" and Noah coming "like a firehose." LMAO!!

Reply

willwork4dean July 25 2013, 02:31:09 UTC
I love the fact that everyone can tell it's Casey just from one line of dialogue! It was supposed to be a surprise but everyone has figured it out.

This was a fun chapter to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Reply


valenti1965 July 25 2013, 05:11:27 UTC
Such a great chapter!!! So Jeff is out...and seems Noah has made him a little heart-throb lol

I really love Jeff in this story so much! What a great guy he is.

Yeah...I think that's Casey coming in lol

Enjoy your break and I can't wait for more!!! x

Reply

willwork4dean August 6 2013, 01:18:35 UTC
FYI - the new chapter is up!

Reply


wheelie47 July 25 2013, 11:05:34 UTC
Such a great chapter! Love how cute and so damn sexy they are together! I also love how unfazed they both are about their story coming out! Just proves how much in love they are.

Lol that was a shock for Casey!

I hope to God that picture wasn't leaked by Luke! Like Gillian I feel for Luke too. He's going to be hurting!

Glad to hear there'll be another update soon!

Reply

willwork4dean August 6 2013, 01:18:55 UTC
Hey, wheelie - just wanted to let you know the next chapter is up.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up