Oh my god, Noah is breaking my heart. And Luke too. He is slowly realizing something is wrong, with him and with Noah. Please let them find him before it's too late. And please, please, please kill Colonel Crackpot once and for all, for all our sakes!!
That said, thank you so much for this story. Not sure how something so heartbreaking can make me smile, but it does.
I just finished reading all of the stories in this AU; heartbreaking and well-written. I echo all of those who would like to see more, but if you don't write any more in this verse you have left us with a spare and evocative vision from which we can spin our own tale. Very well done. CLC
A powerful story. It's melodramatic, and at the same time subtle. For example, rather than depicting a meeting between N and L, you make the decision to have Luke watch Noah and try to figure out what's happening...loved that!
Comments 6
That said, thank you so much for this story. Not sure how something so heartbreaking can make me smile, but it does.
Sincerely, your biggest fan!!!
Reply
Just one of the many good lines from this piece. Excellently executed!
sue
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment