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Sweet Surrender

Mar 20, 2010 21:30

Title: Sweet Surrender
Fandom: Brothers & Sisters
Word count: 1,277
Prompt: "I Don't Want to Miss a Thing" by Aerosmith @ walkers_fics
Rating: PG (for language)
Summary: Kevin and Chad break up. Kevin and Scotty get another chance.
Author's Notes: I own nothing.

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community: spell_divine, pairing: kevin/chad, community: walkers_fics, warning: slash (canon), character: kevin walker, writing style: fan fiction, written: 2010, character: justin walker, character: kitty walker, character: scotty wandell, character: nora walker, character: sarah walker, fandom: brothers & sisters, pairing: kevin/scotty, character: chad barry

Comments 8

luna_veritas March 21 2010, 02:46:55 UTC

""Please don't break my heart this time," Scotty said."
Beautiful line.....nice job :D

willows_whiten March 21 2010, 03:14:09 UTC

Thank you very much!

adishatz March 21 2010, 08:55:45 UTC

Great, just great! Loved the kitchen scene (LOL at Justin's comments! :D) and the last scene :)

willows_whiten March 22 2010, 02:52:55 UTC

Thank you very much! Haha, thanks, I had fun writing Justin's comments.

marea67 March 21 2010, 09:47:48 UTC

I like Chad. I'm sorry he got hurt... but, you know... Kevin/Scotty.... sigh... :)

willows_whiten March 22 2010, 02:57:35 UTC

I may try to give them a smoother break-up, but I don't know if I can do it, because of their differences. We shall see. Haha, yes, in writing I say, "The sacrifice of the small is always worth the success of the greater" :).

srtawalker March 21 2010, 21:09:45 UTC

I know I broke up with you, but you're the one I want. You're the one I want sleeping next to me. You're the one I want to miss while I'm sleeping, not because you're far away, but because I'm missing out on experiencing you. I choose you Kevin. I choose you.

Awww!! So beautiful!! Thanks :)

willows_whiten March 22 2010, 02:58:13 UTC

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it :).