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I Think We're Alone Now

May 09, 2010 00:06

Title: I Think We're Alone Now
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Genre: Fluff
Word Count: 465
Summary: Hermione lived for these moments.

Originally written for Round 3, Week 6 of rwhg_ldws. Prompt: One Line (first or last ( Read more... )

ron/hermione, rwhg_ldws, pg-13

Comments 9

lectura35 May 9 2010, 11:53:15 UTC

He leaned down and whispered, "Let's get out of here."
Uhh! I do shiver with that line. It´s so cliché and so... erotic. ;)
This was really great. And It has a lot to do with the subject we´ve been talking, right?
Bravo, honey!!

willow_wand May 9 2010, 21:23:43 UTC

Yeah, I wrote this to try to get the snogging thing off my mind. I don't think I need to elaborate on how brilliantly I failed at that.

I chose the line because of a movie line that said that's the most common line in movies because it works in any situation. ;) I'm glad you liked it!

lectura35 May 9 2010, 23:31:36 UTC

Yes, and the movie is "Three to tango", right?
I remember that line too! :)
And you didn´t failed... It was just a little misunderstanding:)
Very romantic drabble, really.
Have a nice week!
I need a muse to help me because I can´t concentrate enough to write on my essay... My brain seems empty...! LOL :)

willow_wand May 10 2010, 02:02:54 UTC

Yes it was "Three to Tango"! I didn't think many people saw that movie. My sis is a HUGE Matthew Perry fan! ;)

Oh, I mean I failed to stop thinking about snogging! Writing this made me want to more!!

Thanks! I hope you have a good week, too! Good luck finding your muse!

honourweasley12 May 9 2010, 19:15:10 UTC

LOL, I couldn't help but think of Tiffany when I saw the title! XD

Lovely work, Jenn! That was a very sweet moment between the two of them, and you have perfectly described Hermione's thoughts and emotions. Excellent! :)

willow_wand May 9 2010, 21:26:15 UTC

Eighties pop stars FTW!

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

biliussue May 11 2010, 16:14:36 UTC

"This was their first celebratory gathering since the war and there was a rawness to it, a hesitancy as though they didn't want to appear too merry" -- (favorite line) I get such nice imagery from the warm, mid-summer evenings at the Burrow. Thanks. Sorry about the DQ

willow_wand May 11 2010, 20:38:20 UTC

Thank you. :) I wondered what it would have been like the first time they celebrated something. My grandpa died the week before Easter, so it's a weird thing to have to celebrate while you're still in mourning.

It's cool. Next time I'll be smarter about following the rules. ;)

miss_daizy May 12 2010, 05:00:29 UTC

Oh, this is just lovely!