Poor hermione. Of course she would immediately think that the problem was hers and not Rons or the timing or anything else. You did Ron perfectly his worry and his uncertainty and trying to help. Wonderful!
Well, in my mind they both went to see the healers to find out the problem. The healers didn't see anything wrong, but Hermione isn't so optimistic. :)
Loved him comforting her and that she let him. As much as I hate the thought of it happening, it makes a lot of sense that there might have been permnent repurcussions of Hermione's torture and I think you used that well here. But Ron's comfort and the frustration of both of them was beautifully done.
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Wonderful!
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!
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*cuddles them both*
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That was beautifully done! So realistic. And Ron's reaction was perfect!! ♥
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