HP fic: Trying

Oct 05, 2008 00:36

Title: Trying
For: ronhermione33
Rating: PG
Pairing: R/Hr
Prompt: private/dance

Summary: Ron tries to pick up the pieces when some otherwise happy news leaves Hermione in anguish.

Trying )

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hollydoodle19 October 5 2008, 07:50:59 UTC
Poor hermione. Of course she would immediately think that the problem was hers and not Rons or the timing or anything else. You did Ron perfectly his worry and his uncertainty and trying to help.
Wonderful!

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willow_wand October 6 2008, 23:49:26 UTC
Well, in my mind they both went to see the healers to find out the problem. The healers didn't see anything wrong, but Hermione isn't so optimistic. :)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

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hp5freak October 5 2008, 08:55:07 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

*cuddles them both*

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willow_wand October 6 2008, 23:50:04 UTC
Gotta love them.

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rose_starr October 5 2008, 14:22:13 UTC
Oh! *sob*

That was beautifully done! So realistic. And Ron's reaction was perfect!! ♥

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willow_wand October 6 2008, 23:51:29 UTC
Thank you. Ron grew up so much during DH. He knows better how to give Hermione what she needs.

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pigwithhair October 5 2008, 16:08:40 UTC
Loved him comforting her and that she let him. As much as I hate the thought of it happening, it makes a lot of sense that there might have been permnent repurcussions of Hermione's torture and I think you used that well here. But Ron's comfort and the frustration of both of them was beautifully done.

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willow_wand October 6 2008, 23:52:20 UTC
Ron is lovely isn't he? *sigh*

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pili204 October 5 2008, 19:10:41 UTC
Oh, how sad. It's a good thing we know that Rose will soon be coming along. I think Ron was wonderful to Hermione.

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willow_wand October 6 2008, 23:53:44 UTC
In my mind, Rose will be conceived in three months and by the following Christmas, they'll have their own little Weasley. ♥

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