Drabble: Lost All Control - Hawaii 5-0 Rating: PG-13

[willow_fae_20]

Title: Lost All Control
Author: Willow_Fae_20
Fandom: Hawaii 5-0
Pairing: Danny/?
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
A/N: This isn’t my usual style. But I'm really proud of it.

Comments

[simplyn2deep]

I don't know if it's creepy or not, but I could hear him laughing like that in my head

[willow_fae_20]

I'm glad you were able to hear it.

I have an idea of what lead up to Danny being in this situation, but I'll leave it for another time.

[simplyn2deep]

whenever you decide to post it, I look forward to reading it

[ignemferam]

wow the angst! it's powerful!

[willow_fae_20]

I don't normally write angst, so I'm glad it worked.

[dawnebeth]

That's so brutal and sad.

[willow_fae_20]

Thanks. Hopefully I'll be able to get the rest of the story out, and help Danny find some peace.

[rainbowwizard1]

OMG I love this!!

And yay, the hour of the wolf! \o/

[willow_fae_20]

Yay!

I'm so glad you picked up on that. When I read the lyrics, where it talks about 'another shot of whiskey...' and 'it's 1am, I'm a little drunk...' Susan's lines of dialogue about the 'hour of the wolf' just jumped out at me. So I figured I had to use them somehow.

[rainbowwizard1]

Ivanova is one of my favorite characters, and I love that episode arc and her scenes with Lyta, telling her the hour of the wolf story was just awesome =D

[kaige68]

This is fierce and heavy. Excellent job!

[willow_fae_20]

Thanks. I'm just breathing a sigh of relief that it worked. I've also got most the back-story to this plotted out in my head...

*flails a bit* I'm supposed to be working on my Spring Fling fic.

[kaige68]

:) You will get there.

I have the same problem myself. 100 words written and 7 billion in my head as to why! You will get there!