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Fic: Between Friends - Act One [The Closer]

Apr 25, 2011 15:53

Title: Between Friends - Act One [The Closer]
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine, never was.

Summary: Raydor and Johnson clash over the murder of an officer on his beat. Each woman has something to lose, but what if they also discover something they can gain?

Previous Chapters: [ Teaser] [ Cold Open]

A/N: After three helpings of cheesecake; an Easter Creme ( Read more... )

doctor who, sharon raydor, the closer, brenda leigh johnson, brenda/sharon, fan fic

Comments 12

defyingnormalcy April 25 2011, 19:59:09 UTC

*sigh* I do so love your writing. I'm very excited that you have continued with this, LOVING it thus far. :)

wildwildwood April 25 2011, 20:04:38 UTC

What?! How did you even get to read it this fast?! LoL - thank you for the kind words :D

PS - I've been meaning to ask - how'd it go with Upper Canada Mac girl?!

defyingnormalcy April 25 2011, 20:08:28 UTC

Ugh. Upper Canada Mac girl is NOT going to work out. I'll text you....

I think I came online like as soon as you posted this, lol. :P

goldenbrown09 April 26 2011, 00:31:58 UTC

What... what the...? Already? No no no! I want to know who the hell is Michael!! I hate cliffhangers!!!

He-he. Don't mind me. I was just too caught up with the story. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter!

I really LOL these:
"You will leave Major Crimes and we will all celebrate like they did when the house crushed your sister back in Oz, do you understand me?"
=> It would be mean if it wasn't so funny.
And
"Go get 'em, or nab 'em, or do whatever it is your department does. Steal her candy - I don't care. Just...shoo!"
=> I so can see Brenda saying it!

BTW, Brenda: I totally can tell you what the "third look" means... ;)

wildwildwood April 27 2011, 01:38:37 UTC

LoL - I'm sure Brenda'll appreciate all the help she can get deciphering that mysterious third look :D

lindy999 April 26 2011, 02:48:31 UTC

I love your writing. This is very intriguing.

wildwildwood April 27 2011, 01:39:23 UTC

Thanks - I'm glad it's not boring/awful...

lindy999 April 27 2011, 12:48:04 UTC

Your writing is never boring or awful!!!

moodweather April 26 2011, 06:09:22 UTC

... and cut to commercial :D

I'm loving this story so far - the casefile is great and the B/S is delish. Specifically, this:

["... You will leave Major Crimes and we will all celebrate like they did when the house crushed your sister back in Oz, do you understand me?"]

I actually snorted when I read that. Can't wait for the next part!

PS - what is that mousse egg and *where* can I get one? A chocolate-free Easter has left me with a wandering eye for anything chocolatey and delicious...

wildwildwood April 27 2011, 01:41:38 UTC

LoL - I'm glad that line didn't come out too harsh! I cut it out and put it back in a few times...

PS - It's a Cadbury Creme Egg - it's a pure sugar rush as it's milk chocolate (or what passes for chocolate here in North America) with a sugary fondant filling... I can't stand them, but it turns out you could surround ANYTHING in brownies and it'll be delightful! :D

caity_love April 27 2011, 16:57:47 UTC

I love that you've made this a continuing fic, and that your writing is entertaining and fun!!