Fic: Inertia - Part 21 [The Closer]

Mar 11, 2011 12:15

Title: Inertia - Part 21 of 21 [The Closer]
Rating: R to M (for mild descriptions of ladysex)
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her relationship with Sharon growing more serious, Brenda begins to wonder about just how close she's willing to get to the other woman ( Read more... )

sharon raydor, the closer, brenda leigh johnson, brenda/sharon, fan fic

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lindy999 March 12 2011, 01:20:22 UTC
Too short!!! But still so beautiful. Horray for Brenda Leigh and Sharon Marie!!! They so deserve happiness.

I just loved this fic so much. I can't wait to go back and read it again in a few weeks. I'm excited to read it all at once. Waiting for each chapter was brutal :(

Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I can't wait for your next project. Maybe a sequel ?!?! :)

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wildwildwood March 12 2011, 15:38:48 UTC
Well thank you - they do both deserve to be happy, especially together! As for future projects, let's see what happens... :D

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frenhu March 12 2011, 12:08:17 UTC
I'm sorry to see this is the end, but I immensely enjoyed every moment of the journey you've taken us on!

I"m curious also why Laura came back, I don't think it was explained...or am I missing something as well? :)

Please write more for this fandom, you are a wonderful writer!

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wildwildwood March 12 2011, 15:40:56 UTC
All good things must come to an end... :) Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement throughout the whole series - it was very much appreciated!

You're not the first person to ask about Laura, there WAS a reason - and I'd written the scene where they explained it, but it always just seemed like exposition shoved into some random scene and I just kept cutting it :S

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madampresident March 12 2011, 22:32:02 UTC
So include it as a deleted scene in the final cut ;)

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moodweather March 13 2011, 09:01:52 UTC
Hmm I would also approve of this

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winter156 March 12 2011, 15:44:59 UTC
Haven't commented on your story so far, but I had to come out of the woodwork and tell you what an absolutely fabulous job you did in writing this. You wrote the characters perfectly and wove an intensely captivating story. It was a wonderful read from start to finish.

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caity_love March 12 2011, 17:20:51 UTC
What a lovely ending to an amazing story!! Though, I am sad to see it end. :P It is scary how well you write them.

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madampresident March 12 2011, 22:33:08 UTC
Sad to see it end too! But it was a great story and I really loved reading it and I hope you write more soon!

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