Fic: Inertia - Part 15 [The Closer]

[wildwildwood]

Title: Inertia - Part 15 [The Closer]
Rating: PG - 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her relationship with Sharon growing more serious, Brenda begins to wonder about just how close she's willing to get to the other woman.

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Comments

[rebakathy]

Sharon is being really stubborn and really...you had to end it right there? Can't wait for more.

[wildwildwood]

Of course Sharon's being really stubborn - that's what she's good at! I mean, look at your icon, there she is, being all stubborn and shiny haired! :D

[lindy999]

Oh, good grief, so Sharon realizes she loves Brenda and then dumps her, really ??? **head ... desk** You better not make us wait to long for the next chapter, this is torture :) lol. Really, this is wonderful and so damn enthralling. God I love this fic.

[wildwildwood]

People in love do many, many, *head...desk* things!

Besides, where would be the fun if she said 'I love you' and then Brenda said 'I love you' and then they adopt some sort of child-type creature and live happily ever after? Where's the drama in that? :D

[lindy999]

LOL, so true :)

[defyingnormalcy]

Ugh!!!! Sharon!!!! *slaps Sharon silly* You love Brenda! and Brenda loves you! Get your ass back together and have awesome make-up sex, NOW.

Frustration with fictional characters aside, I loved this update. I really love Laura, and I am glad that you are using her as an integral character. :D

[wildwildwood]

Thanks - I'm glad you like her... I don't want to rely too heavily on her, but you just need a sane, normal person to straighten things out between these two sometimes!

[madampresident]

Oh. Wow.

I love that the black bra is like a thing now. I'm so glad that this fandom/ship has recurring themes like "matchy little outfits" and Brenda's black bra. Just great ♥

Willie Rae tickles me.

Did you ever explain why Laura moved back in with Sharon? I seem to remember that Sharon asked her and Laura said she'd explain later... but did she ever explain? Or did I just miss it?

Exciting chapter as usual!

[wildwildwood]

Black bra. It's canon (now :).

I'm glad Willie Rae tickles, she'll be around for a little bit... And no, we never quite covered why Laura's back, but Brenda flat out asks her in the next chapter, so it's funny you brought that up! :)

[swtlilsophie]

What the actual HELL Sharon!

You better get to writing and give us another chapter ASAP! =P

[frenhu]

I second that :) Also, I can totally understand Sharon's reaction tho I can't really help and just bang my hand in the nearest wall.

What a wonderful chapter! Want MORE! :)

[wildwildwood]

LoL - Even your icon!Sharon looks confused as to why she just did what she did!

:)