Fic: Inertia - Part 13 [The Closer]

[wildwildwood]

Title: Inertia - Part 13 [The Closer]
Rating: PG - 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.  Laura's my own, but she's not a major character.  The song mentioned, not mine - but it found its way into my brain about a week ago and hasn't left since.  Sorry.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her

Comments

[nadezhdast]

Aww, this is breaking my heart too. Please have them talk to each other in order to sort things out, because at the moment it seems that everyone else can see how they feel except for them and that's sad. They're really cute together and should stay that way (me thinks). Oh, and I absolutely love the whole Raydor family. :) Good luck with your real life work and looking forward to the next chapter.

[wildwildwood]

Talk to each other?!

Sharon + Brenda?!

LoL - everyone else can see it except for them! We'll go through a rough patch, but let me just say my favorite part of fanfic is you can alwaysALWAYSalways give them the happy ending you want!

:D

[moodweather]

Just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this series - agree with an earlier comment, this is definitely one of the best multi-chapter B/S fics I've read. The story flows well and the introduction of the family has added a really nice dynamic. I'm just hoping it's not going south for B & S! (grimace)
Look forward to the next update ...

[wildwildwood]

I *JUST* posted a comment over at YOUR fic! I can't believe that was your first completed post! It was such a beautiful scene between them!

[major_roon]

Ugh, I was just about to comment on this part when I saw you updated again already! You make me feel like a complete loser for being so slow

[wildwildwood]

Trust me, you're not a loser - you have a life. My ability to update so quickly is from lack of lifedom, thereby making ME the loser!

I'm glad you and Paul have that in common! That you can believe Martha as Sharon's mother is GREAT - it means I didn't just make her up out of thin air and there's enough plausibility in her character.

The two-phone thing! I forgot all about that! THAT was such a great character point that they did! Brenda's going to have to be a grown up at some point in her life, it may as well be now, right? The fact that she's already missing Sharon who's downstairs is telling that she's in over her head and her ability to lie and charm herself out of this one... I just hope I haven't written them into a corner :S