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wildwildwood

Fic: Inertia - Part 4 [The Closer]

Jan 26, 2011 18:48

Title: Inertia - Part 4 [The Closer]
Rating: PG 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Sharon Raydor assigned to shadow Major Crimes, Brenda's forced to figure out the root of her varied feelings for the other woman.

Previous Chapters ( One) ( Two) ( Three)

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sharon raydor, the closer, brenda leigh johnson, brenda/sharon, fan fic

Comments 13

lindy999 January 27 2011, 00:03:43 UTC

OK, so I think I'm first to comment and if I am, let me say, FIRST!!!!! :)

I really like how this is going, how their relationship is developing. I'm very interested to see where you take their relationship. Can't wait for the next chapter.

wildwildwood January 27 2011, 03:24:26 UTC

I've never been FIRST-ed before and it's an honour! :D

major_roon January 27 2011, 00:20:00 UTC

One, I'm so jealous of your mad writing skillz and two, what kind of freakin' genius are you ( ... )

wildwildwood January 27 2011, 03:32:47 UTC

Ok, so coming from you (because I am salivating over YOUR Closer fic on ff.net; not to mention your completely Badass characterization - I feel like mine are too namby-pamby compared to yours!) I am beyond thrilled you're enjoying it! We can be mutual fans of each other, how's that ( ... )

phalanges_d January 27 2011, 00:44:34 UTC

yes yes yes!! This is such a guilty pleasure! Loving the development!

---and it gets so much better while eating chocolatecake imagining Sharon made it *headdesk*

wildwildwood January 27 2011, 03:39:32 UTC

Well, to be honest, LIFE is better with chocolate cake :D

tanama30 January 27 2011, 00:51:05 UTC

great update i love the scene of finding the mystery cake maker it was a cute scene. update soon i love it and can't wait for more

wildwildwood January 27 2011, 03:40:04 UTC

Thanks so much - glad you liked the mystery cake!

bsgroxmysox January 27 2011, 01:23:35 UTC

Just read all four chapters! I love your way of writing these characters! You've really captured the sense of confusion between these two and I like the fact that this relationship could develop into a solid friendship, like what Brenda misses with Fritz, or it could be a romantic relationship.

I love their interactions, especially the last part of this chapter.

It seemed there wasn't much to clarify. This made me literally laugh out loud!

Can't wait to see where you take this :)

wildwildwood January 27 2011, 03:41:23 UTC

Awww - thanks! I'm really glad you like the two and their interactions... Am very impressed/honoured you did a marathon reading of all four chapters!