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korepersephone January 18 2011, 09:41:26 UTC
I squeed when this came up on my flist!

I'd almost forgotten about it but what an ending!

THE REUNION was so perfect and romantic and GAH! I'm such a sucker for those things :> And Zuko being surprised and pleased when Jet kept coming back, awwww.

This is one of those stories that I will come back and read again (and again!) because there is so much amazing I can't even process it all at once ♥♥♥

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ali_wildgoose January 19 2011, 16:41:53 UTC
Oh man, thank you so much! I'm glad to have given you a pleasant surprise! <3 <3 <3

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arielsvoice January 18 2011, 16:34:52 UTC
As I said in my previous comment, words can't describe. Nothing short of a masterpiece.

I'M WAITING FOR THE MPREG! (and you know, I wouldn't mind it being Jet....)

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ali_wildgoose January 19 2011, 16:42:47 UTC
Those are some pretty flattering words, honestly, so I'll take 'em <3 <3 <3

Thank you for taking a moment to comment! I really, REALLY appreciate it! :D

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redrikki January 18 2011, 16:50:16 UTC
Man this story was great and the ending didn't disappoint. I mean, Zuko swoops in on a dragon, Zuko's breakdown over killing his sister and Mai and Jet getting drunk. Seriously, could it have been better?

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ali_wildgoose January 19 2011, 16:43:50 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really wanted the ending to be satisfying, and I'm gratified to hear it worked for you! Thank you! <3

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unjapanologist January 19 2011, 15:46:05 UTC
Oh, sniffles. I wasn't here yet when the bulk of this story first got posted, but it's so damn beautiful, and this epilogue is gorgeous. Kudos to you. Especially the scenes were Zuko was reunited with Jet were too poignant for words.

(My vote for a sequel would be Mai/Jet/Zuko, because Jet needs someone who's prepared to stick a very sharp knife in his oblivious assholery balloons. And mpreg.)

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ali_wildgoose January 19 2011, 16:45:26 UTC
Knowing me, I'll probably write SOME kind of ridiculous mini-sequel eventually <3

I'm really glad to hear that the story all came together for you -- thank you for taking a chance on a WIP, I really appreciate it! And thank you for leaving such a kind comment! <3 <3

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shadowsofapen January 19 2011, 20:52:21 UTC
I don't have an appropriate Avatar icon, so happy Kaylee will have to do.

Thanks so much for posting the ending to this. I reread the whole fic before getting to the epilogue, which took a good three days, due to college and the fact that this thing is AWESOME and EPIC and totally worth re-reading. It was great to really get an ending, especially one full of hearts and squee and adorable flailing Zuko and Jet putting on his big boy boxers and dealing with it.

Thanks so much for such a great read.

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ali_wildgoose January 22 2011, 16:45:58 UTC
Kaylee is awesome and that icon is adorable, so as far as I'm concerned EVERYBODY WINS. <3

Oh man, you reread the whole thing? I'm incredibly flattered! Thank you so, so much for taking the time, and for then coming back to leave a comment! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it! :D

Jet putting on his big boy boxers and dealing with it

PFFFFFT. WELL SAID ;)

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