TF: Luck of the Draw

Nov 03, 2010 21:10


Rating: PG13
Series: G1
Pairings: Future Smokescreen/Prowl
Summary: Smokescreen joins a card game and gets in over his head.
Warnings: Non-graphic violence - I didn’t go into much detail
Disclaimer: As per usual, the good things in life are not mine to have, but belong to someone else... in this case Hasbro, Takara and IDW and anyone else I’ve forgotten ( Read more... )

prowl, smokescreen, speedwriting, tf

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Comments 16

mmouse15 November 4 2010, 03:36:08 UTC
Interesting. I like how you answered the prompt and then followed up with a look at Smokescreen's feelings. I liked the story.

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wildernesstales November 4 2010, 14:13:49 UTC
Yeah, Smokescreen just kinda ran away with it...

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left_eye_better November 4 2010, 07:21:28 UTC
I like fics that takes place pre-war. It allows writers to play in the world but not completely wreck the existing timeline to do so. This was an excellent example of one of those fics. I like its shortness and how it alluded to more with out having to drag it out. Nice Job.

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wildernesstales November 4 2010, 14:14:17 UTC
Pre-war is so much fun to play with.

And I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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tainry November 4 2010, 07:41:31 UTC
“Excuse me.” That smooth soft voice.
PURRS MIGHTILY OH HEEK YEAH!!!!! <3

algkhalsgashdga police procedural with PROWL!!!!! ::makes flaily dolphin noises:: I could get interested in a show like that. Yep. Book 'im, Dan-o.

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wildernesstales November 4 2010, 14:20:28 UTC
Yeah, I had to get Prowl's voice being yummy in there somewhere.

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aniay November 4 2010, 19:45:53 UTC
Oh that was most entertaining read, and would you look at that I actualy have a Prowl icon.

And I really enjoy rare pairings, It lets you see the characters from toaly diffeent pov.

Good work

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