TF: Being Watched

Jan 12, 2010 23:08


Rating: PG-13
Series: G1
Summary: Breakdown was right.  He was being watched.
Warnings: Vortex.  He needs a warning all of his own.
Disclaimer: As per usual, the good things in life are not mine to have, but belong to someone else... in this case Hasbro, Takara and IDW and anyone else I’ve forgotten…
Authors Notes: Yet another bunny from the tf_bunny_farm  - ( Read more... )

vortex, bunnyfarm, tf, oneshot, breakdown

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kyra_neko_rei January 12 2010, 23:16:12 UTC
I like this Vortex.

Very fascinating how Breakdown gets to a point where he relaxes once Vortex shows up.

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wildernesstales January 17 2010, 18:23:16 UTC
Hee, I'm glad you like him.

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eerian_sadow January 13 2010, 00:17:54 UTC
you're right. for Vortex, that was fluff. i loved how he played poor Breakdown. it was perfect.

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wildernesstales January 17 2010, 18:23:37 UTC
*grins* Yeah, Vortex fluff... it's a whole new category!

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eerian_sadow January 17 2010, 18:24:14 UTC
it really is. we must expand on this.

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mmouse15 January 13 2010, 02:37:46 UTC
Damn.

Wow.

You are such an amazing writer.

Yes, that, for Vortex, was fluffy and cute, but the lead-up...makes the ending all the more stunning.

I'm just...going to go re-read this about 10x times tonight. I loved it.

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wildernesstales January 17 2010, 18:23:47 UTC
*blush*

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caiusmajor January 13 2010, 02:46:42 UTC
But this is dark and twisted and wonderfully sadistic! And also fluff. *hearts on*

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wildernesstales January 17 2010, 18:27:17 UTC
*grins* Thank you!

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seikk January 13 2010, 03:17:46 UTC
Vortex's fluff is a very special kind of fluff 8D

He stalks you until you are a ball of panicking mental mess because he cares!

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wildernesstales January 17 2010, 18:27:35 UTC
That just sums Vortex up I think :)

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