Fic: Exhausted

[wildcat88]

Title: Exhausted
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2800
Characters: John, Rodney, Ronon, Teyla, various cameos
Summary: In Woolsey's absence, John is in charge. What could possibly go wrong?
A/N: Written for coolbreeze1 who wanted to see John exhausted. Many thanks to kristen999 for the beta.

Comments

[titan5]

This was great! I love an exhausted John, stumbling around trying to keep control and getting cranky! Ronon not explaining so John could let off some steam was perfect, as was his threat to stun him at the end.

[wildcat88]

Thanks! The dynamic between Ronon and John is such fun to play with.

[outsideth3box]

Wow, by the end I was wiped out and squinting, too. I get migraines and I was having so much sympathy for Sheppard, and having to just force his way through it, *cringes*.

Very well done.

[wildcat88]

Thanks! I don't have migraines so I'm happy to hear it sounded right.

[padawan_aneiki]

Ditto to all those comments up above. lol Like Titan, I love the bit with Ronon at the end. Perfect. :)

[wildcat88]

Thank you! Ronon really knows how to read John.

[coolbreeze1]

Yay! This was awesome! I love Exhausted!John. Poor guy...

My favorite line (lines?): "McKay, tell me what you know."

"That would take years..."

That's just so McKay. Thank you!!

[wildcat88]

Thanks so much! Snarky McKay is always a delight to play with.

[leesa_perrie]

Poor John! I loved the ever increasing emails (!!), the growing exhaustion and McKay's tactless 'what happened to you?' (snerk)!!

And Ronon at the end there was perfect! He does enjoy stunning John (or threatening to in this case)!!!

[wildcat88]

Thank you! The boys are such fun.