Ficlet: The beauty of nature (Simon/Jayne)

Jun 10, 2007 12:16

Title: The beauty of nature
Author: Ann
Summary: It’s not meant to be like this, not meant to be getting complicated and confusing and so frustrating that Jayne’s gripping more tightly, thrusting harder into the arching man beneath him.Rating: R ( Read more... )

prompt fic, fic, firefly

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bugchicklv June 10 2007, 20:14:23 UTC
Holy Hell--that was hot. And OH-so-angsty. Looks like Jayne's got himself a dilemma. Of course, since he DOES turn them in, I can't help but wonder how Simon repays the "kindness."

I'm thinking spankings. *wink*

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wildannuette June 10 2007, 20:23:42 UTC
*blushes* Thank you. Yep he does have one big awful problem coming his way, of course any kind of punishments only going to be all the worse since Simon's going to be ll over Jayne in a good way before he finds out what really happens.

And oh yes, spankings...*grins* damn now i'm getting more smutty and kinky ideas lol

*hugs* Thanks sweet :)

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wildannuette June 13 2007, 16:30:18 UTC
Thanks *grins* Always means a lot to hear I'm keeping them in character-it's a fear of mine not too >< *hugs* Glad it hit the spot :)

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vinniebatman June 12 2007, 22:16:04 UTC
Very good. I like it when people show Jayne being capable of deeper thought.
Very nice.

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wildannuette June 13 2007, 16:31:42 UTC
Thanks *hugs* Must admit i like show to the thoughts and motives behind the plot, Glad you liked it, thanks hon :)

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xx_squish_xx June 13 2007, 01:57:25 UTC
Excellent little snapshot of them! I especially liked how things are getting more complicated for Jayne. 'Cause I think that would definitely happen! :)

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wildannuette June 13 2007, 16:36:22 UTC
Thank you :) Oh yes, i think complications go hand in hand with relationships and i think with Simon, that's what he's getting dragged into. *hugs* Ta hon

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lucawolf June 21 2007, 12:42:28 UTC
::nature boy:: Never did think Ariel were only about the coin & Jayne, fearful from within is a fascinatin' creature to track. Great story!

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wildannuette June 21 2007, 16:54:21 UTC
*grisn* Thanks hon, I have to agree i think there's more to him then meets the eyes. Damn shame we didn't get a chance to see it on screen *damns fox*

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