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Across the Line - Chapter 7

Oct 18, 2013 03:39

Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

Comments 28

hyunnyb October 18 2013, 05:10:44 UTC

Funny, I was just thinking about this fic last night and what do you know?...and update! Yay<3 You really have a terrific gift for dialogue. You manage to put the reader right at the other end of that table and let us be witness to such charming banter. The white board was genius. I absolutely love Yuchun you make him sparkle and the interactions between Yunho and JJ are melting my heart. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for sharing this one!

wild_terrain November 19 2013, 06:57:42 UTC

Ooh, I seriously love it when that happens. ^^

Gosh, thank you, I am happy you enjoyed the bantering in those scenes. That's really sweet.

Haha, the white board has just began. >D

YunJae are already making me feel sappy even though they're barely a glint in the other's eyes. God help me/us later on lol!

Thank you for reading!

kiboushinjitsu October 18 2013, 05:29:50 UTC

Aigoo, gotta love the Soulmate. I'm glad the grandmother will be introduced soon. Get to see more of that is Jaejoong's burden. But I can already see the growing affection Yunho has for Jay. I mean, who won't. Thanks for the update!

wild_terrain November 19 2013, 06:59:33 UTC

Soulmate make life interesting, that's for sure.

Nothing with JJ is ever simple so there's always something to see there right now. So many tiny pieces...

Oh exactly, who wouldn't! For either of them. ^_~

Thanks for reading!

wake_up_my_soul October 18 2013, 05:32:48 UTC

The use of the whiteboard is hilarious and I love the pace.Yoochun says what we all want to at some point lol

wild_terrain November 19 2013, 07:00:21 UTC

heheh the white board has just began. >D

Doesn't he! And then some. XDD

Thanks for reading!

ztarplay October 18 2013, 10:16:33 UTC

Fucking brilliant! Yoochun is incredibly funny.

I can't stop thinking about that little shared lightbulb moment between Yunho and Jae though. That connection really did shake Jae up. It must have been quite the shock.

wild_terrain November 19 2013, 07:02:22 UTC

haha, glad you're liking him. He's so much fun.

Aww, that connection. It did seem to be a little overwhelming. He'll be in more shocks later at this rate. lolll

Thanks for reading!

dilovesyunjae October 18 2013, 13:47:15 UTC

Cant wait fr next chapter..♥

wild_terrain November 19 2013, 07:02:55 UTC

Bit by bit it is getting done~

Thank you for reading!