LJ Idol Week 2 - Round and round the (freeloading) hamsters go

[wild_muskrat]

I sit listlessly on the edge of the small, single bed, staring down at my hands. In them is nestled the small, black noose. Every day, it wriggles more of its reptilian body into my soul, slowly dispatching tentacles to every nerve in my body; taking over; controlling. I no longer knew how to distinguish reality from the world the noose wants me to

Comments

[elderwoodpixie]

Wow! That was very good! The twist at the end brought it all together, finally the rest made total sense.

[kittenboo]

Nice twist!

[sweeny_todd]

another really clever entry. I was imagining something completely different, but then! then I was like ohhhhh! yes~! it all falls into place!

[alexanderscttb]

Damn. . . I feel like the twist at the end really resonated.

[wild_muskrat]

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but we're all in this boat together -- it's just a matter of degree, I fear. :(

[alexanderscttb]

I hear you.
Do you support those who make the decision to remove the influence of a phone from their lives, or to delete/abstain from using a Facebook account?

[me_sonrei]

I honestly did not expect the ending here. Well done!