My sister has white blonde hair, the burnished moonlight shade that starts from silvery roots. That hair almost cost her her life. The rest of it was my fault. Or so I thought at the time.
We grew up in Hawaii, and in 1973 I was eight. We were at a party at a beach house with a long sloping lawn. The adults milled around the
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I was fishing with my two year old. I had a line in the water; he was above me playing on the hill...or so I thought. I was trying to stick the pole in the mud so I could go up and be with him. By the time I turned around he was nowhere to be seen. I never known Terror until that day. I scrambled, yelling, searching, not knowing where to turn, and thinking the worst. I was helpless and needed to knock on doors when another father yelled out to me..."he's o.k.... he's down here". Then I seen my ventursome little camoflauged boy turning the far corner of our pond and heading for the boulder we always played on.
I know exactly how your mother felt!
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But alas, life is what it is. I try hard to avoid parties and social settings in which kids are present but go unattended or ignored. Exposing children to alcohol and drug consumption is so beyond the realm of "OK" to me, it makes me literally sick. And when I cruise with people's kids it breaks my heart to hear how mom and dad's choices affect them. So I'll do the only thing I can do and simply be the change I want to see.
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So yeah. These things shape who we become and this is one more reason why I work with kids, and NOT with substance abuse counseling.
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Just a few minor things:
1. My long hair hung down and floated on the water like red seaweed.
2. “Bonny drowned,” I said baldly. Did you mean without expression, like someone in shock? Should it be blandly? I've never seen baldly used like that, but, if this is the case, please ignore my suggestion.
3. It didn’t matter what he said - I would have welcomed a beating. Dash or a semi-colon instead of the comma.
This was a very nice piece. Good luck!
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