Forces of Nature Chapter 5 part 6/21

[wide_eyed_raven]

... I fail at life... I'm sorry. I went away for the weekend and visited family. It was nice, and I got new flip-flops (thongs for those not living in the state, I believe ^_^) I dunno how long they will last, cause my dog Jing Jing (she's a jack russel) likes to eat them... (she has a shoe fetish something fierce

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[wide_eyed_raven]

I noticed just now... when I went bak to add something I forgot...

I have... and so far it is writing well... kinda (but then again it hasn't gotten to the questionable parts yet.)

[grimmsical]

Is there something wrong with Rai's heart? D8

“Why are you hiding from, Will?” you should take out the comma. anywhos, I like Will a lot, Luriel makes me giggle, Paraklee seems nice and Rai... hot. xD I like gruff people, for some reason. :3

[wide_eyed_raven]

No, nothing wrong with his heart, that is just where he feels his dragon shifting and coiling. It's kinda like his physical response to that.

I should...

Will is fun... Luriel is my cute little sweetie... Paraklee is probably the only one that usually has his head on his shoulders... and Rai's my shmexy moody man :p

[wide_eyed_raven]

Luriel's real cute. He's the youngest of the crew and you'll start to see that later (I hope)

I know, I'm mean. It was probably a series of accidents at first that his wings kept popping out.

If I ever got a back tattoo, it would be of wings. *nodnod*

handsome face, I believe ^_^

Wonder what intension means then...

ooops. :p

[the_camster]

I like it! ^__^ Paraklee's wings are downright awesome, and I like the fact that you added the part of the outline going all the way down his legs like that. It sounds like it makes more sense as far as the size of the wings would be.

I think Rai's 'nervous twitch' will soon come to the attention, and amusement, of the other three, and it will turn into something they almost tease him about. :D

I call them flip-flops up here in MN... and so do a lot of other people...

[the_camster]

*snort* Aussies can go and call them thongs all they want. I'm still using my ever-affectionate 'flip-flop' name. hmph >;P