Forces of Nature Chapter 3 part 4/21

Aug 18, 2009 19:48

Ello! I've been vera busy with school lately. Textbooks are not fun to read. *wrinkles nose* Anywho, I hope I'll have more time to work on crap. I am already looking forward to this weekend, and it's Tuesday. Speaking of which, I need to put myself on a schedule so I post. Tuesdays are for Forces of Nature till I say so, and Thursdays are ( Read more... )

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grimmsical August 19 2009, 03:27:27 UTC
Ohoho, more mystery~ :) yay.

I have this strange urge to say "I'M ON A BOAT!" xD

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wide_eyed_raven August 19 2009, 04:13:37 UTC
Indeed ^_^

I like boats... can you tell? Actually... I would probably freak out on a ship in the middle of the ocean and have a panic attack... no land for thousands of miles? No Thanks... I'm afraid of Outter Space too ;)

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wide_eyed_raven August 22 2009, 00:22:02 UTC
I'm thinking, in particular, my pschology book... there was a pharagraph of 8 sentences that all started out with "We have seen" and I wish I was over exaggerating.

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wide_eyed_raven August 22 2009, 23:26:47 UTC
yeah... it kind of made me want to shoot myself... just a bit. I kinda like my Anatomy book, it's actualy rather fun to read, but then again, I thought my chemistry book was well written ^_^

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wide_eyed_raven August 22 2009, 00:31:54 UTC
You read too much into things? Never! I both love and hate how you see all of those little things I attempted to do to explain without explaining. You nail them spot on. Ummm... I dunno if I would call Luriel more grounded... logical I think. But he is a professional student.

You understood it vera correctly. They will be revealed in due time (or is it do?)

He is! Isn't he adorable! You should wait until William finds his way into the troupe and the thing that happens because of it ;)

... only two? I am impressed with myself... prolly commas and semi-colons missing... but wow.

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wide_eyed_raven August 22 2009, 23:28:38 UTC
I thought so to! cause do time just looks weird...

... Oh... I'm sorry bout that *wink*

They are! and they are made of evil! (actually, they are kinda cute... cause you can make winking smilies with them... ;) )

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the_camster August 19 2009, 19:22:15 UTC
:D I knew Rai was more than just the ship's captain! And the idea of him having a dragon form because he is a fire elemental is so completely cliche, yet brilliant.

*sneaky eyes* Of course you have an interest in Paraklee... and of course you have a problem with Lucius. *smirks*

The further you get into posting this story, the more and more hooked on it I become. I think it is one of your better ones! ^_^

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wide_eyed_raven August 22 2009, 00:36:47 UTC
... I know... but I wanted a reason to play with dragons... it was either that or a phoenix and the shifting of scales in his chest was too much to resist.

Indeed! :p Lucy is just a friend. He's married to Paraklee's housekeeper Rosa... she's mentioned briefly in chapter one.

Really? It was supposed to be epic and amazing... I spent months planing it, I made maps of their routes and countries, defined their religion, found pictures for their clothes, designed archetecture and tried my hand at speech patterns (you'll mostly see that in Rai)and I still feel like it could have been sooo much more. *shrug* We'll see what happens with Corruption, which I plan to be bigger, but... meh.

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the_camster August 23 2009, 02:22:41 UTC
*snicker* The fact that dragons are more known to have possession and treasure-keeping issues was too much to resist, right? ;P

Oh... than there really isn't a reason for him to be upset... meh. It's the supposed situation that counts! ;D

Then I guess I just get to anjoy all of the built-up epic and read it all!!!! Muhahahaha! ^____~

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wide_eyed_raven August 23 2009, 06:38:05 UTC
That too... I mean, fits of jealous rage are always fun, especially when they end in sex. *shrug*

Indeed!

Indeed... I worry that you will one day destroy me with a plot bunny or something... *eyes your icon* It would be epic... Death By Plot Bunny or Overworked Slash Writer Dies of Mysterious Mutiplying Bunny Disorder.

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