Yoga Magic - Part 5

Apr 28, 2011 11:55

Title: YogaMagic
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A concerned Morgana sends a stressed out Arthur to a yoga class where he meets yoga instructor Merlin. Arthur finds a bit more than peace and serenity.
Warnings: None.
Notes:  There's just one more chapter after this one and it's 90% written.  Like Arthur I'm working out my ( Read more... )

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kattale April 28 2011, 16:40:13 UTC
*LOVE*
This was so sweet.

Merlin knows what it means to have a friend pull you through the rough spots. And he's taking his turn being that friend. I really liked that he drew the line at cleaning up the vomit and blood though - good on him for setting boundaries to how much he's willing to give.

I love the realism of this story, from the tear-inducing yoga, to the feelings of despair and hope. Your Uther is terrifying, but entirely redeemable, and that is hopeful too. Such a tender moment, with Merlin's head pillowed on Arthur's knee, and a hand carding through his hair. That really just sums up this friendship, and it was possibly the best moment in the story for me.

Thanks so much for alerting me to the update - it was the perfect soothing end to my hectic lunch hour.

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wickedtrickstah April 29 2011, 15:48:46 UTC
Thanks again :-) I'm glad it's coming across as realistic! Arthur silently comforting Merlin is one of my favorite parts as well!

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inadaze22 April 29 2011, 01:55:08 UTC
Oh this is just lovely. Arthur is a mess. Merlin is a recovering mess. And watching their friendship grow and develop...and even find some boundaries...has been a pleasure to read. I'm rooting so hard for them - especially Arthur - to find inner peace and tranquility. Uther was hella scary, but I think he'll come around. Maybe. possibly? Er. :) Arthur really is a mean drunk. LOL. And Merlin = adorably patient.

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wickedtrickstah April 29 2011, 15:49:59 UTC
I take a bit of pleasure in writing HotMess!Arthur - Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the kind words!

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emz567 April 29 2011, 08:51:27 UTC
Aw, this fic is lovely. You have the balance between the two charachters spot on. I particularly loved Merlin standing up to Uther :)

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wickedtrickstah April 29 2011, 15:50:52 UTC
Thanks for the lovely comment :0)

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hampshirerose April 29 2011, 19:29:42 UTC
This is just going from strength to strength!

I love Merlin being so capable and sorting Arthur out.

I love Arthur letting him.

And I love your Uther (I love Uther anyway - I think he is misunderstood!)

I just am loving this totally!

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wickedtrickstah May 2 2011, 14:42:24 UTC
Merlin taking good care of Arthur is the best isn't it? I also think Uther is a bit misunderstood, yet still scary as hell. I like seeing him show both sides of his persona. Thanks for the lovely note :-)

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mychaostheorem April 30 2011, 01:23:15 UTC
OMG please more, i'm addicted :D

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wickedtrickstah May 2 2011, 14:43:16 UTC
More to come either tonight or tomorrow depending on how my Monday goes! Thanks for reading!

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