LJ Idol Week: Trust everyone, but cut the cards.

[wickedsin]

1989"I have something to tell you," he whispered

Comments

[bleodswean]

This is really powerful and so depressingly realistic. I enjoyed the dialogue-only parts very much - nicely done.

(I think you may have an important typo in your last killer line.)

[wickedsin]

Fixed, hard to write on a phone! Thank you!!

[bleodswean]

You're welcome!

[murielle]

And sometimes, with some people that's what you have to do.

Great read. Heartbreaking conclusion, but beautifully written, perfectly paced. Well done!

[wickedsin]

Thank you very much. First LJIdol entry ever, so I was nervous!

[sinnamongirl]

This is such a realistic portrayal of what drug addiction can do to a person, thank you for sharing. Really rang a bell with me.

[wickedsin]

Thank you, though the fact that it rang a bell also makes me want to say I'm sorry.

[dreamsreflected]

This hurts to read. It's very well written. Addiction is horrible.

[wickedsin]

It hurt to write, thank you for taking the time to read and comment.