week three of Brigits_flame

[wickedmommy]

Title:Trash Day
Rating: R for some Offensive language
Prompt: Happiness is

Comments

[musicrocks987]

I really liked this!
It kept me interested the entire time!
There wasn't a moment that I wasn't not interested.
The imagery and the ending tickled me pink.
It wsa so good!

Best of Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

[aisling87]

Wow! Great twist at the end. That caught me off guard. I liked this a lot. Good luck this round. :)

[the_panic_light]

Ha! Brilliant! Brilliant! I love it. Very...mmm...Desperate Housewives? Fantastic.

Just to let you know you spelled "Bob" as "Bod" one time up there. :)

[the_panic_light]

Oh, and I've just noticed we've both used the name "Sara" in our entries this week! Ooooo.

[lacruciverbiste]

awesome story. hopefully i'll get to edit it this week! check out my piece if you get a chance.

good luck in the polls!!

~la cruciverbiste :)

[desire_of_nymph]

The end totally made the entire entry :) Well done!