The Collection - Chapter 14 - FINAL

[wickedlaw]

Keiko was pacing her room. He hadn’t brought Rin back yet. He is taking longer than usual. Much longer.

The hours, or what she thought were hours, ticked by and no still no signs of Rin nor the man.

“What do you think this mean, Shige?”

I don’t know, it’s weird. So he’s never done anything like this before.” It wasn’t a question, but Keiko answered

Comments

[babyshazam]

OMG the last chapter!!?! PLACEHOLDER! :D I still have work & will be back later with comments!!!

It was a nice ending! Am glad Yamashita returned the girls (and he wasn't arrested for what he did! :P) his fascination with them was really creepy but luckily he has Akane now :)) who is somewhat like him too XD and that last line keeps the tone & mystery of the whole story. I really like this fic!! The plot is different to what I've been used to reading so I got really hooked :3

Thanks for writing and sharing this <3

[wickedlaw]

I loved the last line, it gives it a nice little twist.

And the story reads different than other fics, it's more like a novella or short story.

I'm happy you enjoyed it!

[dasha_1710]

OMG....
Such an wonderful end and surprising prologue!!!!
I hope Akane and Yamashita will be happy without having anybody in Purple, green, etc. rooms ^^ She loves him and he does too. My favourite happy end. Like it.
Thank you so much, Analie for this wonderful story!!! It's great! I enjoyed it really!!!
Thank you so much, my dear Wickedlaw! You did great work with your sister!!!!
Thank you, girls <3<3<3

[wickedlaw]

Thank you so much for reading it Dasha-chan!
I'm glad you liked it, maybe she'll write something else later... if she does I hope you read that too =P

[dream_air]

Awwwww Nice!!!!! I like it and the ending is very beautiful.

[wickedlaw]

I'm so glad you think so!
I loved the twist at the end, but I wanted to know what everybody else thought, so I'm glad you liked it too.

[cheekmunk0409]

Omg, great story and ending! Totally didn't expect Akane to join in on the bandwagon. I haven't read a fanfic in awhile but really enjoyed this one. Disturbed psycho Pi is really interesting. I think he could play a really good villain in a drama/film someday.

Also, I always thought Keiko was Koyama but then who's Keina? Thanks for sharing this fic.

[wickedlaw]

Im so glad you liked it!!
I can't wait for Pi to play a bad guy... it would be amazing!

Keiko was Koyama, the last one was more like... all Kei's look good in purple kind of thing lol