once upon a time - emma/sheriff fanfic

Nov 20, 2011 20:02

title: you learn of love from the love they kept.
author: wickedandcruel
category: romance
rating: pg-13
character/paring: emma/sheriff
summary: She’s quite sure she’s incapable of love.

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steroid November 21 2011, 00:31:39 UTC
So, so hot. Love these two <3

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maybebaby1280 November 21 2011, 00:37:57 UTC
Ooooh, very hot! Nicely written! More please ♥

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happyevraftr November 21 2011, 02:20:27 UTC
*flail* I love this!! Emma/Sheriff are so hot! You did a fantastic job bringing out the tension and lust, while simultaneously giving us an in depth look into Emma's character. Great job!

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stephantom November 21 2011, 05:12:50 UTC
Your writing is beautiful. And I think you have Emma down really well. I can imagine her thinking like this: ...she has no idea what this is exactly, only that it scares the shit out of her.

I also love how, even though this is this wonderful moment that stands out against all the bleakness in the town (and you capture that so well -- the fog, the wolf between the trees, Henry's smile etc.), it's still grounded in reality, with all the practical difficulties and unexpected silliness of reality. Like when she is trying hard not to laugh, thinking about killing the mood to tell him she can't move, the way they're positioned -- and then inadvertently killing the mood in a much bigger (and very funny) way.

Great work! I didn't really care about this ship much before reading this, but I think you've changed my mind! :)

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fan_cifully November 21 2011, 09:12:34 UTC
This was great! I too think you've captured Emma's character extremely well, especially her insecurities.
Loved it :)

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