Comments | wicked_loving: My first fic in like EVAR

wicked_loving

My first fic in like EVAR

Jul 27, 2009 23:11

Title: Whispers in the Dark
Rating: R
Series: The Justice League
Pairing: Superman x Batman (Clark Kent/Bruce Wayne)
Summary: Clark and Bruce share a moment in the dark. Bad summary, I know, but still read please 8D

( I'm still trying to find out where the farm boy learned to do that with his tongue )

justice league, fic, batmanxsuperman

Comments 10

skund July 28 2009, 06:26:12 UTC

Oh wow, steamy little morning encounter. I really enjoyed how you described the relationship between Bruce and Clark. :) And Bruce's little concessions for his lover that he wouldn't make for anyone else. Great stuff, thanks for posting!

Few little nitpicks, I hope you don't mind. Jahn should be John. There's a few cases of to and too mixed up. :)

wicked_loving July 28 2009, 08:05:50 UTC

Is it John? I thought The Green Lantern was J-O-hn and the martian was J-A-hn. Note for the next time! Thanks for the clearing that up.

And thanks for the compliment. :) It's the first ficlet I've written in awhile. Glad to know I still go some talent left. xD

skund July 28 2009, 08:14:48 UTC

Umm, Green Lantern is John Stewart I think. Martian Manhunter's human name is John Jones, which is similar to his martian name J'onn J'onzz. ... That's still totally confusing. :P

Talent never goes bad! Sometimes I just forget where I left mine. XD

wicked_loving July 28 2009, 08:38:06 UTC

Aaaaah. Yes, very confusing. I always thought that in the JL animated series his name got pronounced 'Jahn' with an 'ah' sound, but maybe that was me putting them straight in my head. Oh silly super heroes with the same first names.

Hahaha, this might be true. Somehow mine decided to poke it's head up out of whatever hole it's been hiding in. I blame the JLU marathon on Boomerang >>

kittymayhem July 28 2009, 10:26:00 UTC

*throws hands up in the air* Whoo hoo! Hot stuff! :)

Early mornings are so nice for little bedroom encounters. I love the way you led up from the salvation of the darkness and progressed it to the morning light. Everything in between, their relationship, their words, Bruce's little hang ups about several things, and his musings about his lover (which he'd probably never admit aloud ;) ) were beautiful and quite entertaining!

And I wanna know where Clark learned how to use his tongue like that now! lol

I thank you for posting this and I hope to see more! :D

wicked_loving July 28 2009, 17:17:55 UTC

*blush*

I'm glad you like it. I had worried it wasn't up to snuff since I haven't written anything in a long time, but glad to know it made people happy xD

And I shall post more, I assure you ~

saavikam77 July 28 2009, 17:00:10 UTC

Just lovely. :) Bruce deserves more uninterrupted nights like this one, even if the world comes calling later in the morning. :p

wicked_loving July 28 2009, 17:13:19 UTC

Oh the woes of being a superhero~

bradygirl_12 July 28 2009, 18:26:34 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful! I liked the sexy hotness and Bruce comparing Clark to J'onn and Diana, knowing that Clark was best for him.

And the progression from darkness to light was so well done.

Clark's proclamation of being Superman was sweet, and I'm sure he'll take care of things in deep space and be back in time for Alfred's roast! :)

wicked_loving July 29 2009, 04:22:57 UTC

You can't miss out on that roast. It's to die for ~