A new poem/song I wrote last night.

[wiccanmistress]

Here it is........(I haven't come up with a title for it yet)

What manner of mayhem is this,
       It's so hard to read the signs,
       The numbers are all against us,
       Though we haven't done the crime,
       Now we try to fix it,
       And we're running out of time

(chorus)
There's so much negative out there,
Greedy people gathering power

Comments

[lady_iliera]

Wow. That's perfect! I just read it through once and my brain laid clear vocals on it instantly!

*grits teeth* Goddamn retards, we could have that song ready to record inside a week!!!!

I love you I love you I love you!!!!! (And yes I heard us singing together, you on power leads me on soft harmony.)

Let me tell you - Chris did say that if I can ever make enough money to pay for our lives on our own, Chris' move whereever - the question is how long that'd take!!! >.<;;;;

[lady_iliera]

Suggestions: Manner of Mayhem (alliterations are always good), Mayhem, Chaos, The Prophecy

Also Solutions by Design would be a really original and catchy title, and allusions to it are in a couple places in the song so that it might cause people to look harder. Although I like Manner of Mayhem and The Prophecy too. But the tune I heard fits Solutions by Design better since I heard a faster tempo with a repeating melody and it's a bit alt-rock with a heavy edge. But that's just me. ^_^

[wiccanmistress]

I was also hearing something alternative rock with a heavy edge. And I too like solutions by design....makes people think more..I agree. Glad you liked it.

[lady_iliera]

Liked it is a serious understatement. I instantly connected with it. >:P#