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marea67 April 11 2010, 15:15:56 UTC
Wow! Just Wow. I've love this from the start and it had a perfect bitter-sweet ending.

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wibbleywobbley April 11 2010, 19:26:49 UTC
Aw, thanks! I just had to have them meet one last time. K/S forever!

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adishatz April 11 2010, 15:37:54 UTC
Yeah, WOW! That was a moving story. Very well done and very well written! :)

I'm so pleased that they saw each other again and exchanged I love yous (and make up for lost time! :D).

Poor Scotty. Finding again the love of his life and losing him so quickly. I hope he had a happy life and found love again (but of course not this one true love! ;)).

Love Julia and Sarah!

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wibbleywobbley April 11 2010, 19:28:45 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, I needed them to see eaach other again, and it was pretty obvious they were going to, no matter how hard I tried to fool y'all!

I hope he had a happy life and found love again (but of course not this one true love! ;)).
I'm sure he did!

Love Julia and Sarah!
How can you not?

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anoirtaca April 11 2010, 15:47:46 UTC
That really was an amazing story. Such a perfect but bitter-sweet ending. The last 3 lines of the 'untitled' poem are heartbreaking yet hopeful. Great work :-D

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wibbleywobbley April 11 2010, 19:29:23 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked!

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srtawalker April 11 2010, 16:11:23 UTC
Really great!

But you know I like happy endings (With tears in my eyes)

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wibbleywobbley April 11 2010, 19:33:30 UTC
Aw, sorry.

On one hand, I think we all need a good tearjerker once in a while. On the other hand, I really do think this is the happiest ending they could realistically have - together again, a chance to say I love you, knowledge of what happened to the other person. They could never really be together and open, I don't think, but they could have a little time somewhere alone together, kind of removed out of time, if you will!

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tiffanie39 April 11 2010, 22:45:13 UTC
Such a sweet meeting. At least they got that. But to get that letter on moving day..wow! Such a wonderful story and such a sad ending but we knew it was coming. So beautifully bitter-sweet.

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wibbleywobbley April 13 2010, 11:20:00 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

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