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Challenge #6 - Truth

May 02, 2005 22:42

Title: The Profound Sins of my Birth
Author: misora_no_miko
Rating: K
Characters: Juliano, Robin
Word count: 100
Note: Whoo! Finally made down to 100 words again. ^^

( The Profound Sins of my Birth )

challenge 06 truth, father juliano, robin, author: misora

Comments 5

mscongeniality May 3 2005, 19:59:56 UTC

I love the last line!

anenko May 7 2005, 00:59:48 UTC

Great look at Robin and Juliano's relationship, and his conflicted feelings towards her.

variation on your theme....XD amononline May 13 2005, 22:13:31 UTC

The weathered hunter removed his trenchcoat, gazing down at her by his feet. “So you’re willing to accept everything?” he asked.

She bowed low before him, penitent, pleading; her whispered words hushed in the dark room. “Even if the truth were to rip my body to shreds, it would be better than my soul eternally wandering in darkness.”

Amon sighed. Blameless...she was entirely blameless, and the sin was partly his own. But could she live with what he was about to tell her?

"Robin, I want to express myself physically with you," he whispered hoarsely.

Re: variation on your theme....XD misora May 18 2005, 01:25:31 UTC

*snorts* bwahahhahaha!

I think his last line should've been "Robin, I want you to swallow." (WHAT?!? He did ask her if she was 'willing to accept everything', didn't he?!? XDDDDDD)

Re: variation on your theme....XD jenshinrai July 14 2005, 16:15:36 UTC

The avatar is mischievous.