Always

Jun 13, 2006 00:27

Author: _snakeface
Title: Always
Request: "Because the world does need more Harry-fic but to make it different from kiarasayre's request, Harry & Sarah after the SJS audios, talking about Will (assuming whatever you like happened post-Dreamland)" for paranoidangel42
Rated: G. WARNING: Harry-level blasphemy.

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paranoidangel42 June 12 2006, 19:13:37 UTC
Oh, wow, I love this! From the warning down to Sarah's comments about being of a certain age. And their friendship and uneasiness about talking about Will, and Harry purposely winding her up.

Only criticism I could find was that I'm sure 'Tenth Planet' should be Planet 3 (Three?) and thank you should be two words.

And oh, you killed Josh. Except in my happy world he's still alive until they do a third series and put us all out of our misery.

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_snakeface June 13 2006, 02:27:33 UTC
Thanks for the corrections. And Josh is dead because death = angst and soliloquies in your hospital bed. I think he did die, but the aliens came and saved him and mad adventures were to be had, even if he is a filthy cultist.

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paranoidangel42 June 13 2006, 13:17:24 UTC
Oh, angst is always good. I like your idea for how he survives (sort of), though. I agree he is a filty cultist - I think he's worse than Will because Josh went into it willingly, and even though he was protecting Sarah, he still killed people.

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_snakeface June 13 2006, 13:33:35 UTC
I didn't mind when he killed people so much when it was for Sarah, but when it was all motivated by his crazy cult I got SO ANGRY.

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kiarasayre June 12 2006, 22:45:10 UTC
I haven't heard the BFAs, couldn't find any synopses, and was utterly lost through the whole thing. Despite that, I loved it. Your character voices were awesome (but what happened to Sarah's hands?!) and putting Harry and Sarah in a room together just made it sparkle, period. Good job! :D

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_snakeface June 13 2006, 03:13:37 UTC
Heh, yes, it would be a little obscure. Basically, Sarah was in a little spacecraft like the one Richard Branson's planning, and the pilot was a member of a cult that was trying to kill her. He shot her friend, got shot, and Sarah was left in the broken spaceplane as it floated away. The end. It was heartbreaking. The fingers were supposed to be lost to frostbite as the plane lost life supporty things.

And thank you.

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calapine June 12 2006, 23:36:39 UTC
“Sarah, old girl-”

“Harry, I’m getting to be of a certain age where that is just offensive.”

That was a wonderful bit of dialogue, yes. Muchly enjoyed the story!

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_snakeface June 13 2006, 03:23:09 UTC
Hee, my aunty is "of a certain age", so that really came from her. But thank you!

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