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The body is a beautiful thing. She admits to herself that she has never noticed before just how much of a spectacle it is. Right now she doesn’t think she ever wants to notice. The problem is she has. And there’s no way to un-notice. Here they are, staring into each other’s eyes, asking the big question: to do or not to do? Of course they
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I like the way Sooyoung can't stop staring, interesting way of describing her fixation.
However, this phrase " “You’re beautiful, you know that?” Sooyoung says." bothered me, the choice of words didn't match with the narrative's style, in my opinion.
It's being awhile since I saw Tiffany's characterization being so vulnerable. I like it, the fact the writer is you makes it even more engaging.
I'm happy you're back, and I am already waiting for the next update.
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I really appreciate the praise. Thank you ^^ I'll try to update as best I can once my vacation starts.
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I really like how both characters are portrayed.
It's really tasteful.
I hope you update soon.
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Thank you for an amazing read.
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it's been a while since I last read dominated Tiffany, she's always the dominant one is most of the fics but I can see that you still portray needy Tiffany.
Sooyoung's character is interesting, she can't do it because she's satisfied eye sexing Tiffany.Well that's different.
I love how you describe them. good job..
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you left your readers in awe but i still want more.
are you planning to write a part 2? if not can i write a part 2 of this fic?
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Very nice. I missed reading SooFany fics. You should make a part 2 :)
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