Rival 2/2 (one-shot)

[whoamongyoulie]

RIVAL PART 02

I wasn’t that surprised when it happened a third time. It’s like once every year. It wasn’t that hard to see the pattern. That third time… I never did find out about the entire story. Third party or none, I knew that girl broke Jessica’s trust. Again. I really don’t get how she does it. I don’t understand how she creeps in and out of

Comments

[timhyun]

Aw :)

It's true though, that bad memories always stick to us. It's what you always think about.

For some reason, because Jessica always called Sooyoung "Sooyoungie", I don't know, but it felt like there was affection there, a kind of affection that she didn't have towards Yuri.

You're story is somewhat open-ended though. Like, what'll happen in the future, will Yuri still continue to haunt them?

[whoamongyoulie]

yes it's open-ended. at this point, though, what I was aiming for was showing just how Sooyoung stands a better chance. Good memories versus bad ones and all that. Sica might still go back to Yuri (who knows?) but what we're supposing is that she'll begin to know better because finally, her best friend is around (recall that Sooyoung admits that she hasn't been around for ages).

it all depends on how you read it. ^^

[razor_funkydude]

that was an explosive fight... Sooyoung really bent her anger on Yuri but who wouldn't cause she broke Sica's heart...

it's nice on how Sooyoung realize things and her feelings... :)

from the looks of it Yuri had lose to Sooyoung...

[whoamongyoulie]

true. Yul had to lose this round. haha. but like the commenter above you said, it's an open-ended thing.

Finally Yuri lost !

[klrax]

Hey,

This two shots was quite an open ended story. I wonder if Jessica will go back to Yuri in the end. But looks like that won't happen for awhile since Jessica wants Sooyoung to be with her.When i was reading part one, i was disliking Yuri's character, but at part two, i started to understand her role of the story. Bad memories always do haunt us! Great job on this two shot! I enjoyed it a lot.

Take care,
KlRaX

Re: Finally Yuri lost !

[whoamongyoulie]

aw. haha. I can't believe I made Yul go out like this. nooooooo! but anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

[noordinarylife]

haha This is definitely a first for me. Seeing Yul being the bad guy err...girl. It was pretty interesting.

I do agree though, about the whole "it's the bad memories that'll stick" thing. I think that although it's the good memories that are stronger and probably would never forget, the bad memories are easier to remember. Unless, of course, you're an abnormally hyperactive optimist.

“Welcome back,” she says.

I don’t answer. I walk toward her, pull her close and hug her. Nothing has ever felt so good. Nothing has ever gone by so fast, so fast that I forgot to breathe. I understand Yuri now. I understand why she wants Jessica all to herself.

“Welcome back.”

It sounds nice.

“If she wants you then I’ll want you more.”Aiyeeeeee~ *convulses* (lol, what a reaction

[whoamongyoulie]

haha. but don't you think Sica's just gonna be happy with Soo from now on? I mean, doesn't that come to mind? haha.

When you get your brain cells back, type those questions quick! xD

and yes, whaaaaaatta reaction?! hahaha. convulses.

[noordinarylife]

oh, that was a happy convulsion btw. hahaha
Of course it did come to mind. But then you had to be all " Yul had to to lose this round". I was perfectly content...then all the "what if's" started pouring in.

You tease xD

I picked the happy ending though. nyahahaha
At the back back back of my head though, my mind was able to morph this story into a TaengSic one, where Jess ends up with neither Soo or Yul. But that's just mah brain talkin'

[whoamongyoulie]

that's really one helluva weird way to add to this story. haha. "And then Taeyeon pops out, balloon in hand. 'Sica, will you marry me?' she says."

awwww... I might just make that happen. bwahahaha! you and your randomness!

[anonymous]

I really like this. Not the usual fluff that we come across with.

What I probably like about this is that it speaks of so much truth. And it's realistic.

It's probably weird that I'm commenting now even if it's written in 2010.

Wow!

[whoamongyoulie]

Hi! Well, this is me commenting back in 2016. Thanks for leaving a comment even if it was 3 years after this was written. I'm touched! :D This is actually one of my favorites. I enjoyed writing it a lot.