Sing-Along Songs (The “You Better Look Out For Mr Stork” Duet) [John Chesterton, TARDIS | PG]

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Title: Sing-Along Songs (The “You Better Look Out For Mr Stork” Duet)
Author: biichan
Characters/Pairings: John Chesterton, The TARDIS, Barbara Wright, Ian Chesterton, Tenth Doctor, Tegan Jovanka
Rating: PG
Summary: Johnny and the TARDIS make music together.
Word Count: 1500
Original Story: Listening by tigerkat24
Notes: Thanks so much to ionlylurkhere for being the

Comments

this is tigerkat24, new journal yay

[bookblather]

Oh, wow, this is so amazingly amazing, I have totally lost my grasp of the English language. It's just. Oh, wow. You took my story and made something unbelievably beautiful. Your use of language is precise, well-chosen and gorgeous. I love the TARDIS POV, and I love your handle on the characters (Best Beloved in particular was a great name for the Doctor). Great to see Tegan show up, and Johnny doing what he does best, and oh, oh, this is so, so wonderful.

Some specific things I liked:
-Best Beloved, as I mentioned before.
-The TARDIS looking on her passengers as her little ones.
-(Her Best Beloved fussed and muttered something about turbulence.) Oh, One. Such a perfect little note there

Re: this is tigerkat24, new journal yay

[bookblather]

OH OH OH OH (sorry, hi, I thought of something else) I really love that Martha and Victoria are at the moon-landing party, and the moon-landing party in general. It's a lovely nod to the story that inspired Listening in the first bloody place, and it made me glee a little bit more. So thank you once again for the amazing story!

Re: this is tigerkat24, new journal yay

[biichan]

:D

Re: this is tigerkat24, new journal yay

[biichan]

's a lovely nod to the story that inspired Listening in the first bloody place, and it made me glee a little bit more

HAH! Now I have been revealed and I can safely say that I couldn't have not stuck that little shout-out to Together, On This Same Earth in there. My ego would have not permitted it. And, actually, what made me decide to remix Listening was that I wanted to pay you back for writing such an awesome fic in response to mine by making you something nice as well :D

[akashasheiress]

Aw, I love this! Especially the first bit with the TARDIS and her calling them Barbarawright and Ianchesterton etc. And Best Beloved, of course.:D

[biichan]

her calling them Barbarawright and Ianchesterton etc

She was built by Time Lords, after all, and people having one long multi-syllabic name is normal for them. (Best Beloved I stole from Kipling's Just-So Stories, I must confess.)

[skywaterblue]

Barbarawright was budding!

Oh, bless her glowy heart.

I'm a big fan of the original, and you made it EVEN CUTER.

[biichan]

Oh, bless her glowy heart.

I love the TARDIS in this fic so MUCH.

I'm a big fan of the original, and you made it EVEN CUTER.

I hope I didn't give anyone cavities!

[scarlettgirl]

This is fantastic! I love the interweaving of canon (Martha!) and the varied perspectives. I'm a sucker for stories that play with time and this does so beautifully.

[biichan]

Thank you! I had a lot of fun playing with the different perspectives for each section.

[2_fish]

Wonderful!!! :)

[biichan]

Thanks :)