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Non-Telly Ficathon thinger

Feb 14, 2007 18:54

Title: Remote as the Recent Past
Author: kseda
Rating: G Word count: 1248
Spoilers: The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances and general EDA stuff
Summary: The faintest line of distinction is that which seperates fate from coincidence.
A/N: Written for uktechgirl who asked for, among other things, Fitz, observed by the Doctor(s) of your choice (I went with Nine). ( Read more... )

fitz, nine

Comments 11

wishfulaces February 15 2007, 04:23:57 UTC

and the Doctor immediately found himself peering into wide, scared grey eyes.

Fitz. Fitz. Your entire life is filled with Angst. And I feel I can legitimately say that for once. And wee!Fitzie is ridiculously cute and brings out every single maternal instinct I do not have. And, gods, Muriel, and this line

He looked at Muriel who was too old and thought of Nancy who was too young, of Fitz and Jamie (another one of those ghost names which followed him) who could one day be best mates or fierce enemies, of Ian and Barbara and even Alistair who were out there somewhere, probably evacuated to the country. So many lives running paralell, converging and spiraling around him, drawn into the chaos, joy, and anguish of this life of his

rocks.

kseda February 15 2007, 15:20:40 UTC

For seriously. He'd had more shit happen to him before he even met the Doctor than most companions do, like, ever. And I love crazy!Muriel, even though she's not gone totally batshit yet.

(I think I startled myself a bit with that paragraph. I don't think I wrote it, Nine did.)

wishfulaces February 16 2007, 01:16:02 UTC

(I think I startled myself a bit with that paragraph. I don't think I wrote it, Nine did.)

Isn't it a little bit scary when that happens? I swear, my ficathon story took me to whole different places I never would have expected. But I still have to post that one, so I won't say anymore.

I love that Muriel hasn't gone totally batshit crazy here. She--oh, man, now I want to explore *her* character more, and her interactions with Fitz, because of this story.

kseda February 16 2007, 02:54:27 UTC

*eagerly awaits*

Muriel is amazingly tragic figure. I wanted to get into her head more but frankly it's a bit scary.

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doyle_sb4 February 15 2007, 11:06:56 UTC

*flails with love*

kseda February 15 2007, 15:23:27 UTC

Thank you!

pontisbright February 15 2007, 11:42:32 UTC

*cries*

Oh, it is so very wonderful. Wee tiny ickle Fitz Kreiner, oh gosh, and an interior Nine voice that perfectly suits all the timefucked mental business that goes on in his head while he's capering about handing out chocolate and saving the planet. You have made me entirely wibbly for both of them. Thank you thank you!

kseda February 15 2007, 16:06:51 UTC

I'm so very glad you liked it! And yes, I do have an idea for Five and Turlough bumping into him as well, it'll be along eventually.

I was really surpised how well Nine came out, and very glad that he did. I must have had the most delayed reaction in fandom to realizing how awesome he was. And yet I still have no Nine icons. Woes.

some_stars February 15 2007, 18:55:53 UTC

ohhh! this makes my heart all melty, it does.

kseda February 15 2007, 21:06:36 UTC

Glad to be of heart-melty service! Thank you!