Comments | who_otp: Ficlet: Billets-Doux (Ten/Jo, Ten/Martha, R)

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Ficlet: Billets-Doux (Ten/Jo, Ten/Martha, R)

Nov 16, 2006 14:16

Title: Billets-Doux
Pairings: Ten/Jo, Ten/Martha
Rating: R
Notes: Bad and Wrong, with crazy space incest to boot. Sorry about that.

( She'd always loved him far, far too much. )

ten/jo, martha, jo, ten, ten/martha

Comments 6

chicafrom3 November 16 2006, 22:45:50 UTC

Oh, my God. So very much yes.

Brilliant, in a disturbing sort of way.

livii November 16 2006, 23:07:44 UTC

Aw, thanks, yes - I'm really glad you liked it. :)

hhertzof November 16 2006, 22:50:35 UTC

Sick and twisted. In a good way of course.

Of course the scariest bit, was that I actually thought that you could substitute Sarah Jane and Mickey Smith and the story would work just as well. Now I'm scared.

livii November 16 2006, 23:10:45 UTC

Thanks - I appreciate the comment, I know how weird this was. :)

It could work with Sarah, though I think she'd actually say no to Ten, I dunno? Poor Jo, she was just so in love with the Doctor, and I can see him being able to take advantage of her far easier. :(

pontisbright November 17 2006, 02:58:12 UTC

Oh, good god, you've killed me dead. Fluh. Oh. It's all so horribly in keeping with Ten being dead inside but also insanely, needily human. And Jo being all grateful which makes it worse. And poor Martha. Except it's sort of happy, because it makes him happy, only that's not really ok, is it?

Ahem. Sorry, you make me incoherent of feedback. This is a compliment, honest.

livii November 17 2006, 04:08:56 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! And yeah, I always think - I want the Doctor to get everything he wants, because I love him so much. But it's not actually such a good idea, all the time.

(I do blame you for encouraging me to write Jo-related babyfic, heh!)