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Seventh Doctor fic: Light and Shadow (adult rated)

Jul 22, 2007 09:19

Title: Light and Shadow
Author: evry_lil_breeze
Pairing: Seven/Ray (Delta and the Bannermen) (also possibly very slight Seven/Ace for anyone who wants to read it that way.)
Rating: adult
Warnings: non-explicit sexual situations

Summary: Seven takes Ace for a picnic in rural Wales, 1966, where he encounters an old friend with some unfinished business.

Notes: I ( Read more... )

seven/ray, het, seven, minor female character

Comments 4

valentinite July 23 2007, 01:53:46 UTC

Seven/Ray! Yay! I have no coherent response other than YAY!

evry_lil_breeze July 23 2007, 11:13:02 UTC

That's...all that needs to be said, I think. :) Thanks for reviewing.

livii July 23 2007, 06:51:32 UTC

Oh, how absolutely lovely to see fic for this couple - I'm a huge fan of the pairing. This is nicely done, sweet without being sappy, not a contrived set up, and Ace and Seven's relationship is well drawn as well. And it's really quite hot as well. :)

Two tiny things - in the last line there's a typo, "th Tardis", and there's something...a little odd about the break in parts, like they should be posted as separate chapters, or just given a section break? It threw me for a bit. Not sure what to suggest to make it flow better. But really, this was still a great story.

evry_lil_breeze July 23 2007, 11:18:39 UTC

So glad you liked it! I've been gaga over the pairing since I first saw the serial many years ago. Strictly speaking, I'm supposed to be writing five different pairings for Seven, but can only think of four. I might cheat a bit and do another Ray story, of a different sort... :)

Thanks for pointing out the glitches. I fixed the typo and put a section break in as well as dividing the parts into two different cuts. Hopefully that'll help a bit.