Fic: Where the thoughts did wander ("Pets" entry)

Sep 11, 2018 07:31

Look, here comes a stranger ;)

Title: Where the thoughts did wander
Author: flowsoffire
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing/characters: Twelve, Missy, hovering presence of River Song if you squint and know me well
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: K+
Word count: 424 words.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: One moment within decades. The Doctor thinks and ( Read more... )

drabble challenge, #63

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paynesgrey September 19 2018, 02:39:14 UTC
I'm so excited to see a story from you!
This is a fantastic look into Missy's thoughts toward the Doctor. I think the jarring nature of the interrupters really shows how her mind would work. Well done!
(I love how Missy just fits with this prompt!)

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flowsoffire November 5 2018, 21:46:39 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback, darling :) I'm glad you liked this!

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dancingdragon3 September 29 2018, 03:39:59 UTC
Some really good lines in this fic, like no other toys to play with, and his hope as they sit still in the center of the universe, but my favorite is the communication that fails to coalesce. Very nice imagery.

And I'm always a sucker for a Missy fic, thanks for sharing!

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flowsoffire November 5 2018, 21:47:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm delighted you liked this :)

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auroracloud September 29 2018, 18:56:45 UTC
I love the atmosphere of this, there's a constant quiet tension that never lets up. And you portray their relationship at this point beautifully.

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flowsoffire November 5 2018, 21:47:39 UTC
Thank a lot for the lovely feedback, I'm glad you liked it! :)

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