Lovely! You write them well. My favorite things are Nyssa’s description of Traken’s wind ( and of course the I’m needed” :)) and those two quoting Shakespeare to each other.
Oh, my goodness!! This was so beautifully written! Every word you included had a meaning, the perfect meaning for the emotions you were trying to display! What I am trying to say is ... You Killed it!! Awesome job!! :D
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