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Flash Fiction Comment-a-Thon Round 2

Apr 13, 2013 13:37

Welcome to Round 2 of the Flash Fiction Comment-a-Thon! Each round, we are looking to get flash fiction stories (stories that take up no more than the space of an LJ comment) on a related theme across the spectrum of Doctor Who, from a multitude of authors. Below is the prompt; post a comment to claim an era and I will put you on the list. When ( Read more... )

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Drive Safely (Two/Jamie, PG, 924 words) doctorpancakes May 6 2013, 08:04:20 UTC

“Here we are, Jamie, by all accounts one of the most beautiful planets in the cosmos,” the Doctor announced, leading Jamie out of the TARDIS with a grand flourish into what more or less amounted to an unattractive, sunless wilderness of tree trunks and mulch. The Doctor’s face fell in disappointed surprise. “Oh. Oh crumbs ( ... )

Re: Drive Safely (Two/Jamie, PG, 924 words, continued) doctorpancakes May 6 2013, 08:04:51 UTC

A flap of wings, and Pip was off. Jamie opened his eyes, quite reluctantly, just as they broke through the canopy and into the city above. The sudden influx of bright lights and the hustlebustle of birds passing every which way dazzled him. It was a wonder that the tall branches and leaves could support the magnificent structures and people around them; indeed, perhaps the greatest wonder was the engineers who managed to make such a world work in the first place. Jamie could not help but feel a swell of wonder and admiration for their new friend ( ... )

Re: Drive Safely (Two/Jamie, PG, 924 words, continued) eve11 May 6 2013, 11:26:31 UTC

Aw... well, on the bright side, they're birds so they probably wouldn't know what they were looking at! I really like the world-building in this even though it is short; you get a good sense of the city. And I love the avian engineer who is warm and welcoming even to alien strangers :)

Re: Drive Safely (Two/Jamie, PG, 924 words, continued) doctorpancakes May 7 2013, 00:16:42 UTC

Yeah, the people of Lepidus IV may not be terribly scandalized by a drafty kilt, but best to err on the side of caution lest a wayward gust of wind cause offense :p I've had the idea of this world (and Pip) in my head for a while; I'd kind of like to do more with it (and her) eventually. Glad you enjoyed it!

Re: Drive Safely (Two/Jamie, PG, 924 words, continued) femme_slash_fan May 7 2013, 23:31:58 UTC

LOL, oh Jamie! <3

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