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whiteraven1606

Picture Puzzles Part 14

Jan 17, 2007 08:05

Title: Picture Puzzles Part 14/?
Rating: NC-17
Paring/Grouping (whatever you want to call it): House/Wilson/Chase
Disclaimer: Don't own them, as we all know.
Summary: House worried can be both good and bad.
Warnings: Mention of abuse in the past to more than one character.
Beta:
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housefic, picture puzzles

Comments 35

quack3790 January 17 2007, 23:02:35 UTC

You're excellent and awesome and the only BAD thing is that each part of this fic comes to an end. :) Wilson was quite lovable in this fic. I was surprised Chase was being so chatty with Foreman. He revealed a few things about his personal life to a coworker... wow! LOL Can't wait for more!

whiteraven1606 January 18 2007, 00:55:19 UTC

Cool beans. Wilson got to be clueless for a moment in the bedroom and a worrywart to boot. :D Well, Chase didn't really reveal too much. Yes, he admitted to having a guy for a partner, but that was more so Foreman would be on his side of the fence when Cameron continues to scream abuse instead of wondering if Chase really is being abused. The 'what if' moment was testing Foreman to have a better idea if he'd throw a fit when he found out or not. Of course, this way poor Foreman can't say he couldn't see the possiblility of a threesome. ;)

empressaurelius January 18 2007, 01:04:46 UTC

Aaw, poor House! Poor, used-to-getting-hit Chase! *Cuddles them*

As usual, you've fried my brain with the sex. How do you do it, woman?!

N'aw, mothering!Wilson. ♥

Aaw, I really liked Foreman at the end of this. His reaction was, imo, totally in-character.

whiteraven1606 January 18 2007, 01:10:37 UTC

:)

Ah, well, actually... *shrugs* I've no idea. I've ides in my head like with this chapter I knew I wanted Chase to be hit and that reaction in all three and I knew I wanted to end up with Chase being told/forced to admit that he was worth being loved, but I didn't start out to have him cry through most of the smut. It just worked out that way.

:)

Yeah, I really think it'd be a different reaction should he walk in on something happening, but as long as he doesn't have to see/hear it he's not going to care, imo.

evila_elf January 18 2007, 08:25:25 UTC

Glad to see House making little improvents.
And I had forgotten that Foreman doesn't know! *giggles*

Looking forward to the next part :D

whiteraven1606 January 18 2007, 17:55:16 UTC

:D He's getting there.
hehe. *grins*

I'll have it another 24hrs or so. I have it mostly typed, but haven't sent it to the beta yet.

wombat_hug January 18 2007, 22:08:52 UTC

Foreman was best....I loved him...Foreman and care won't match :D
Poor House, evil Dreams...Well Chase got nice 'sorry' there, it was once again hot.

whiteraven1606 January 19 2007, 03:43:44 UTC

:D
Yeah, poor House. :D Thanks. I'm glad you liked.

timour January 18 2007, 23:42:19 UTC

Have just spent the day reading all of this. Much better than work.
Many, many, many thanks.
You're a wonderful writer and you fic is so well thought out, so careful, your characterisations spot on, your smut so very, very hot. Plus, you're one of the few writers i've come across who manages to make a three way relationship seem realistic.
Thank you. My day has been most pleasurable.

whiteraven1606 January 19 2007, 03:48:04 UTC

Cool beans. I hope you don't get in trouble for not working.
You are welcome.
Oh, wow. Thanks. I like threesomes the most, but it can be hard to find fics. I couldn't find what I wanted so I got annoyed and started writing this. I'm glad mine seems realistic. :D
Thank you for reading (and commenting). I'm glad I could help with your day.