Binding Forces Chapter 1

Jan 16, 2007 18:29

 Title: Binding Forces Chapter 1/?
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Grouping: (H/W this chapter) House/Wilson/Chase
Disclaimer: Don't own them, as we all know.
Summary: House finds out Wilson is more interesting than he thought.
Warnings:  Bondage, BDSM elements, tie!kink(this chapter only)
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askmehowifeel January 17 2007, 22:02:11 UTC
Mmmmm, delicious bondage smut.

This was a wonderful first kinky time. I remember you writing something in the (HOT HOT HOT) Binding Forces excerpt that you posted about Wilson's need to have even his fingers tied down--I remember reading that and thinking DAMN. And I am SO excited to see how we get from here to there.

God, your well-thought-out multi-part threesome fics kill me. Kill me dead. =)

Also, on a totally shallow side note: Every time you write about someone blowing on someone else's sensitive skin (like "House blew on Wilson's balls and watched as the skin shivered" or any of the times in Picture Puzzles). That? Is. So. Hot. GUH.

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whiteraven1606 January 17 2007, 23:47:51 UTC
:)

It is progressive steps. Right now you'll notice mention of Wilson's fingers moving even when his wrists are bound. It goes form there. :D

Cool beans. Well, not you dying, but...oh, you know that I mean. ;D

Oh, you'll probably like the sensation play chapter a lot then. Any blowing on skin, wet or dry is most fun to write. Thanks for telling me what you think.

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ashesmuse January 18 2007, 01:28:27 UTC
*squee* PORN!
delicious porn, with hope for adding a third later, I like. Tie kink is only the start I hope? :)

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whiteraven1606 January 18 2007, 01:36:33 UTC
Yes, porn.
Oh, yeah, only the start. It'll cover a lot of kinks as it goes along. There won't be addition kinks until after Chase is added in. Until then you just get House exploring Wilson's limits and needs with the bondage. It'll only take a couple of chapters to get Chase added because in this fic I'll be skipping time much more than in Picture Puzzles.

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whiteraven1606 January 28 2007, 03:21:55 UTC
So, I've been lax in giving prizes for commenting. I'm catching up. Guess what you get? Oh, yeah, a prize. :D Go to: http://whiteraven1606.livejournal.com/6084.html and comment as to which prize you'd like. :D

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bironic January 18 2007, 04:13:47 UTC
Hey. I've been reading along for a week or two now (caught up on back entries) and just wanted to say that I admire how creative you are with the positioning in all these stories. Half the reason I find your smut scenes so hot is that the characters are doing things I don't see often or haven't seen at all before (like tying Chase to Wilson in the middle of sex), and you always take the time to describe everything without sounding completely clinical. "Binding Forces" is my favorite for purely personal reasons (kink! ropes! ties! weight and pressure and immobility! *ahem*) and I'm really looking forward to more.

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whiteraven1606 January 18 2007, 05:49:53 UTC
Wow. Cool. I like trying new ideas with the smut. There's enough positions and varitions to work with that it doesn't have to sound like cookiecutter type stuff unless I really want it to. :) I try to make sure there's just enough discribition that a completely right/left challanged person like me can still figure out where everyone is, past that you are on your own. I like to think that not every last little thing has to be spelled out, just as long as you aren't confused then I've got enough discribed. :D Oh, well, you'll continue to like this one because there's a lot of that in this. The way Wilson works in this fic is very much about the weight, pressure, and immobility. :D

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anonymous January 19 2007, 21:28:31 UTC
Awesome! I'm not generally a fan of H/W/C at all, but I took a chance on this one, esp. since it starts out in safe H/W territory. Now I can't wait to see Wilson and Chase tied to each other...>eg<
One little problem-in the sex scene, Wilson is on his stomach, and it doesn't say that House flips him back over, but House seems to be looking at Wilson from the front watching him harden :blush:...looking at it again again, maybe Wilson is up on his knees? It was confusing.
Anyways, awesome start! Awesome story! I hope tie!kink reappears, but I'll try no to be greedy about my fave Wilson kinks.

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whiteraven1606 January 19 2007, 22:12:20 UTC
:) I'm glad you gave it a chance.
Oh, ah, yeah. Wilson was still on his stomach, legs spread. House was looking between Wilson's legs. The penis would have been pointing down towards one of Wilson's knees. I know that doesn't sound all that comfortable, but a former boyfriend of mine used to to get hard in that position (though he wasn't restrained in anyway) quite often. Sorry it confused you.
Thanks. I don't know about when/if tie!kink will reappear, but we'll see. If I can think of a new/different way to play with it I'll have it again.

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housepiglet January 31 2007, 19:02:31 UTC
Wow, very hot!

*mops brow and moves on to chapter 2*

Thanks for posting :)

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whiteraven1606 February 1 2007, 01:11:05 UTC
:D Thank you.

Thanks for commenting. And for reading. I hope you like the rest of the chapters too.

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