Comments | whiteraven1606: CSI: Gil/Nick/Greg prompt

whiteraven1606

CSI: Gil/Nick/Greg prompt

Feb 27, 2008 21:46

Title: Hands on Advice 2/2
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Gil/Nick/Greg
Warnings: Collars make a bigger appearance. Breath play. Unbeta'd.
Summary: Greg asks Gil for advice.
Notes: The last chapter was for
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gil/nick/greg, hands on advice, prompts, csifics

Comments 11

morgan_cian February 28 2008, 04:19:03 UTC

*swoons* 'Little one' and 'sir', guh, that was freakin' awesome, darlin'. MC

whiteraven1606 March 2 2008, 03:27:53 UTC

:D I actually wasn't sure about the little one, but seemed like it fit. I'm happy you liked this part too. :)

3nood February 28 2008, 06:21:17 UTC

that was HOT .... thanks

whiteraven1606 March 2 2008, 03:28:24 UTC

I'm glad you liked your chapter. Thank you for prompting.

chaoskir February 28 2008, 09:36:19 UTC

Oh boy, I did it again! Reading your stuff at work. Well, I like that story and I read the first part at home but .... well I want to know, how it goes on and so I read it as soon as it was possible and that was at work. So, I guess I have to deal with my curiosity.
Thanks a lot. I liked and enjoyed reading your hot and very good (believeable) written second part and well it doesn't matter at wich place I read it, I guess, hope or .... assume hm, ......

whiteraven1606 March 2 2008, 03:29:16 UTC

It doesn't matter where you read, just that you do read. :) I'm glad you like it.

ladygray99 May 5 2008, 07:37:15 UTC

how exactly did I forget to comment on this one? I'm all about Dom!Grissom an Sub!Greg and Nick in the mix is just nice. Tell me you have more of these running around your head.

whiteraven1606 May 5 2008, 12:16:49 UTC

Well, since it didn't get much response on the couple of comms it went up on, no worries. I'm just glad you liked it. I do have more running around my head, but I haven't written more since the feedback was very sparse and I thought maybe I'd messed up the characters or something.

ladygray99 May 5 2008, 19:59:39 UTC

I thought the voices were great. maybe you just didn't hit the right coms but I so vote for more. i thought you had Grissom down really well.

whiteraven1606 May 6 2008, 11:59:29 UTC

Thank you. It could very well be that I didn't find the right ones. I don't really know them all that well. I could easily have chosen one of those that doesn't like 'outsiders' playing in their sandbox. :P Oh, good. I wondered if the PS2 game thing would work at all with him winning. Greg seemed easier than anyone and Nick was a little harder. Cath was a pain when I couldn't remember how her word usage really went. I fudged her. Grissom always flows for me once I'm into writing the porn. Less talking works for him. :D

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Re: You Got It!!! whiteraven1606 May 23 2008, 03:09:03 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it so well. I really wasn't sure that I was getting everyone to sound right. I've got another idea for this, but I really need to get up House stuff posted first. Eventually though there will be more. :) Thank you for reading.